And heres my crit for your work. The letters look real shaky take your time for now on, lose all those silly ass drips and connections, and work on your bar width try and keep your letters all the same width.
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one of my old ones , critz????
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@exi - you need more structure man. try messing around with some fills
they can normally get the creative juices flowing
especially if your still new to it
and try to remember to keep your lines straight
they look a little wobbly
(that syfer above is a good example of structure)
red eyes - noice. digging the forcefield and two tone
mogan - your chars are ill. the shading on the shirt is legit
Last edited by FuckTheFame; 10-11-2010 at 01:49 AM.
maybe someone could crit my stuff at the top of da page
@ thepekins, I'm diggin' that last piece in yellow, but I would remove that little add on you've got on the inside of the 'O'. None of the other letters has anything like that so it just looks out of place. But I like your drips and your yellow fill/outline. Letter structure is pretty good. The other two I'm not feelin' so much but I like the 'E's for both and the 'S' on the first one. Also, notice how in the 3rd one you've squished your letters together. I think the spacing between letters in the first one ruins it. As far as the second one goes, I'm just not feelin' the letters, especially the 'S'. Too many straight bars. Just my opinion anyways, not bad, just keep practicing.
Thepekins : liking y o's but not too keen on the e's bud, bottom e is the best tho,
Exi : mixing upper and lower case is always a pain in the ass! But lose y drips n concentrate on y shape, overall shape and bars,
Mogan : like y theme there man, looks sweet!
Redeyes : solid colours and nice fill,
Wgone : smashing it there dude!
And 'truth' for a blackbook comp at my local shop, was well pissed off when I added the second green for the force field, shoulda used an orange or red or sumat to make it kick! Happy critting...
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Yah it was just a 'final rough draft' if you know what I mean.
I threw the points on there just to see what they'd look like.
It says FRITE, btw.
So you're saying keep the letter formation just try making the bars even width throughout?
Last edited by WoRdSmYtH; 10-11-2010 at 06:53 PM.
Use the bar width of your F and make all ur letters sit straight. Dont worry about them blending in just yet, go for more of a slit overlap of each letter. Also scrap that E and lengthen ur R's right leg.