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    I'll try out the suggestions for sure.
    But REDEYES, don't you think if I slim up the 'T' it'll totally kill it's form, especially the center bar?

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    "The letter T is a stupid letter" Lol word up
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    Quote Originally Posted by dangeri View Post
    Thepekins : liking y o's but not too keen on the e's bud, bottom e is the best tho,
    Exi : mixing upper and lower case is always a pain in the ass! But lose y drips n concentrate on y shape, overall shape and bars,
    Mogan : like y theme there man, looks sweet!
    Redeyes : solid colours and nice fill,
    Wgone : smashing it there dude!

    And 'truth' for a blackbook comp at my local shop, was well pissed off when I added the second green for the force field, shoulda used an orange or red or sumat to make it kick! Happy critting...
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    You got a crazy style dude lol.. your shit looks like a monster and shit
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    your shit looks like a monster and shit
    Haha! I think that's what he was goin' for Mogan... Stoned or what? Lol.

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    No if all the letters are the same width it should look good, you can bend and twist the T to help just dont make it so top heavy. Heres an example of that T sorta.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MakeItTakeIt View Post


    Pretty insecure about this one. Crits? The letter T is a stupid letter, it leave so much dead space.

    I'd give crits, but I don't think people would appreciate it much after seeing that ^
    I think that looks pretty fine for now. I would just elaborate on it for now and see how it goes.

    [EDIT] Wait, no. That "E" is bugging me a lot, I would make it more level with the other letters.

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    dangeri i like it but inbetween every letter there is a space except the R and U maybe try to more of an outline around the u on the left side so it fit perfect with all the other letters? it looks pretty legit anyways

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    Quote Originally Posted by RedEyes View Post
    No if all the letters are the same width it should look good, you can bend and twist the T to help just dont make it so top heavy. Heres an example of that T sorta.
    Niiiiice. I like the style in this one. The "H" bugs me a bit, but it's not that bad. Also, the "Z" looks like it's missing some 3D.

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    Actually lookin at at close, the Z has too much 3d lol

    Quote Originally Posted by EXI View Post
    I'm just tired of doing simples and I'm just getting mad that every time I try to add my own stuff into it, it doesnt work out. I feel like I'm just trash with style lol.
    Work on making your letter structure better, that's where style really comes from, not shitty add-ons like drips and connections.

    Thanks for the crits yall, final version. The E is a little fat and the 3d on the N is too skinny.
    Last edited by MakeItTakeIt; 10-11-2010 at 11:55 PM.
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    And yes thats a gucci fill.

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    Haha, I'll give what you're sayin' a try.
    But to be honest, I'm feelin' my 'T' a lot more than that one.
    Last edited by WoRdSmYtH; 10-12-2010 at 05:07 PM.

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    i know its complete ass haha, but what should i do to fix it up

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    crits

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    much better sech...really feelin that..the letters flow and the extensions arent overboard.

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    Good shit as usual sech, love to see you do one with a black fill, think those sort of letters look awesome negative!

    And cheers for earlier comments ppl,

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    Sech bringing out the guns
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    BBBaaaaaangggin

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    Boooonkeerrrs

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    Quote Originally Posted by FlippingChickens View Post
    leak do u ever shut the fuck up?

    lol do u ever not suck? tofe you suck. just stop. from now on you're not allowed to say anything. just post shit and get crits. thats it. nothing more.
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    every tofe piece looks the same.
    Herste that first one is clean, im not feeling how the Horizontal bar on the T goes into the verticle one, if that makes sense. And that second one has good structure and flow but im not diggin the Es, they look like they could be Zs

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    ^i agree with this kid. I have never seen anything new from him. Sometimes i just think he is a troll
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