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    Quote Originally Posted by MakeItTakeIt View Post


    Pretty insecure about this one. Crits? The letter T is a stupid letter, it leave so much dead space.

    I'd give crits, but I don't think people would appreciate it much after seeing that ^
    I think that looks pretty fine for now. I would just elaborate on it for now and see how it goes.

    [EDIT] Wait, no. That "E" is bugging me a lot, I would make it more level with the other letters.

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    dangeri i like it but inbetween every letter there is a space except the R and U maybe try to more of an outline around the u on the left side so it fit perfect with all the other letters? it looks pretty legit anyways

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    Quote Originally Posted by RedEyes View Post
    No if all the letters are the same width it should look good, you can bend and twist the T to help just dont make it so top heavy. Heres an example of that T sorta.
    Niiiiice. I like the style in this one. The "H" bugs me a bit, but it's not that bad. Also, the "Z" looks like it's missing some 3D.

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    Actually lookin at at close, the Z has too much 3d lol

    Quote Originally Posted by EXI View Post
    I'm just tired of doing simples and I'm just getting mad that every time I try to add my own stuff into it, it doesnt work out. I feel like I'm just trash with style lol.
    Work on making your letter structure better, that's where style really comes from, not shitty add-ons like drips and connections.

    Thanks for the crits yall, final version. The E is a little fat and the 3d on the N is too skinny.
    Last edited by MakeItTakeIt; 10-11-2010 at 11:55 PM.
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    Haha, I'll give what you're sayin' a try.
    But to be honest, I'm feelin' my 'T' a lot more than that one.
    Last edited by WoRdSmYtH; 10-12-2010 at 05:07 PM.

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    i know its complete ass haha, but what should i do to fix it up

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    crits

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    much better sech...really feelin that..the letters flow and the extensions arent overboard.

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    Good shit as usual sech, love to see you do one with a black fill, think those sort of letters look awesome negative!

    And cheers for earlier comments ppl,

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    Sech bringing out the guns
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    BBBaaaaaangggin

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    Boooonkeerrrs

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    Quote Originally Posted by FlippingChickens View Post
    leak do u ever shut the fuck up?

    lol do u ever not suck? tofe you suck. just stop. from now on you're not allowed to say anything. just post shit and get crits. thats it. nothing more.
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    i is a toy.

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    every tofe piece looks the same.
    Herste that first one is clean, im not feeling how the Horizontal bar on the T goes into the verticle one, if that makes sense. And that second one has good structure and flow but im not diggin the Es, they look like they could be Zs

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    ^i agree with this kid. I have never seen anything new from him. Sometimes i just think he is a troll
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    Quote Originally Posted by EXI View Post
    I'm just tired of doing simples and I'm just getting mad that every time I try to add my own stuff into it, it doesnt work out. I feel like I'm just trash with style lol.
    I got you man. but seriously letters develop overtime. it may seem annoying and frustrating but always have fun with graffiti dont make it a chore to write, if you cant get something the way you like it put it down and go do something else for a bit.

    Im gonna go look for my first ever graffiti drawings and post em up here so everyone can laugh at how bad i was. Not saying im good now or anything.

    Sorry for the double post
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    keso you act like i give a fuck hop off u fag boy u seriously went that many pages back to bump my shit,LOL!

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    not even close to done but name is SKEE now. i hate my E because i had to cram them in resulting in erasing some of the scene but its just a sketch so whatever. it feels a little busy to me so far but ill fix it. i have a chalkboard wall so im gonna put a huge ass mural on my wall. and yeah i did bite shepard fairy but im giving him the props so i thinks its fine anyways crits?

    sech that is ill i would like to see what it looks like with 3d

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    So I took your guys's advice and just worked on fills, kept it clean.



    ^ that one was made on my new blackbook with paint markers. So i think pretty good for not erasing

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    @ Stigma. I don't know who you bit or whatever but I see potential in those letters. To be honest though, I'd get rid of the whole scene. Seems cheesy and very toy, but that's just me. But yah, as far as the word goes, keep your general letter forms but try curving some lines here and there to give them more shape and flare. I think the 'SK' could also be dropped down a little bit too, the word seems to drop.

    @ FlippingChickens. If you don't give a fuck about your art then stop, and get the fuck off BS. Stop posting the same shit over and over when peeps are trying to tell you to switch it up for your own sake. I'm not hatin' on your shit but it's gettin' annoying, and that's sayin' something 'cause I havn't been on BS but a minute.

    @ Ghostwriter. I'm feelin' that HERSTE shit, but I agree with whoever about the bars of the 'T' comin' into each other. And I know you said it was for a battle or whatever, but that NOVA looks wack IMO.

    And I hate to rain on your parade SECH, but I'm not sure why everyone is biggin' that shit up. I must be in a bad mood or something but I see room for a lot of improvement. I know it's supposed to be SECH but all I see is SG(or A)ER, and a big ass empty space between the first and second letter. Not hatin', wicked style for sure, just wonderin' if I'm the only one that's got some crits on it.


 

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