@ EXI. Big improvement dude. Not sure what that means considering they are DAMN simple. But that shit looks a lot fresher. My advice would now be to forget the fills and 3D, and work on pullin the bars on those simple letters. Just a little pull for now, lol.
Holy shit... Tryin' not to double post or whatever but there's a new piece up each time I finish posting.
@ SYFER. Feelin' it. I think you're 'F' should stand up a bit more, though I know why you've got it leaning, to get rid of the space it creates. Stand it up a bit more so that it does have a small space, about the same size as the other spaces in the piece. It should look fine. I'd change the 'R' too, but it's just a personal preference. Try kickin' the leg of the 'R' up, then break it down, and kick it out. Sort of match it with the kick out of the 'S' on the opposite end of the piece. Just my two cents.
tofe- look at my old stuff and your old stuff look at my new stuff and look at yours... its called progress...some people actually get better and stop repeating old mistakes
yooo a couple exchanges
this is for Grind
and for Seaz
sorry bout the wack fill attempt, all i got is reeeal fine tips
an a apology on the links, can't figure out why my pics wont show up...
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Ay Tofe I like how you blended those warm colors in the 3D it looks nice especially on the N. I like the caligraphy ecept for that last R fallin off, and I hate that O. A normal one would have been way stronger. Other shit needs tweaking though.
tofe, i like the 3d on it. shade the eye better try to make it 3 dimensional not a flat circle.
it was my first time blending colors like that for 3d..going to start doing that effect more often,and yea i agree a normal "o" would have worked a whole lot better
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only use objects for letters when you can shade them correctly and they look good of course haha
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yea not even gonna lie i got the idea from u dog
Hey, first two tries from simps to pulling and getting my own style
what you guys think
A LOT better than what you were postin' before mang.
Now you understand what these guys are sayin' 'bout stayin' way simple?
It's not that your shit wasn't simple, it was that it lacked structure.
Even though in graff you fuck wit' letters and make 'em look crazy,
they still gotta have structure, otherwise they just look like some bunk ass illegible shit.
It's also the reason why a crazy ass piece that most people can't read
can be read by those who know how graff works.
Your next step would be to spend an absurd amount of time practicing that shit.
Develop your own style. Pull the letters whichever way feels natural to you.
You can refer to other people's letters and pieces,
just make sure you maintain the letter structure.
Once you master that you can move on to crazier shit.
Syfer- I like your skinnier shit a little bit better, keept it up, nice form.