A LOT better than what you were postin' before mang.
Now you understand what these guys are sayin' 'bout stayin' way simple?
It's not that your shit wasn't simple, it was that it lacked structure.
Even though in graff you fuck wit' letters and make 'em look crazy,
they still gotta have structure, otherwise they just look like some bunk ass illegible shit.
It's also the reason why a crazy ass piece that most people can't read
can be read by those who know how graff works.
Your next step would be to spend an absurd amount of time practicing that shit.
Develop your own style. Pull the letters whichever way feels natural to you.
You can refer to other people's letters and pieces,
just make sure you maintain the letter structure.
Once you master that you can move on to crazier shit.