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    thepenkins -extension on top of r looks off, and the leg doesnt look right either, the pink is hot tho

    dubbed - x's are a bitch, keep working tho. on the 2nd piece the extension on top of the n ruins the symmettry

    stuck - its a bit cramped, fills are nice. the shading on the inner part of the e on cassie looks incomplete, i dunno if thats just me.

    mogan - the e has go to go, its slant is different from the other letters

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    Quote Originally Posted by SPITONE View Post
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    Mone.... Just flip the m on it's side


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    mone, your shit always amazes me great job man.

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    Ok so I just started about 1 month ago and I would really like some feedback.

    First of all I'm sorry for the image size, but I don't know how to change it.

    the first image is my first try
    the second one is my first character Maj. Values(major values) he represents the values that are dear to me.
    the third one is a stencil I made using photoshop
    the last one, is something I made a longtime ago when I was bored in class and I was Rat instead of Ratto.
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    Quote Originally Posted by extinct View Post
    Mone.... Just flip the m on it's side
    Word up I got a little lazy with the E on this one... the
    M sideways would definitely go good with the style...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ratto View Post
    Ok so I just started about 1 month ago and I would really like some feedback.

    First of all I'm sorry for the image size, but I don't know how to change it.

    the first image is my first try
    the second one is my first character Maj. Values(major values) he represents the values that are dear to me.
    the third one is a stencil I made using photoshop
    the last one, is something I made a longtime ago when I was bored in class and I was Rat instead of Ratto.
    use photobucket.com to upload your photos
    And i'll give you as much feedback as i can, i too am learning but am advancing because of this forum.
    Go simple, your bars are messed up, try to make all the letters same width and length etc, the O in the first one is smaller bars than the R. Think of bars this way:
    E has 4 bars, I has 3, H has 3 etc. Every letter is made up by bars. Just bite off of your computer and stay as simple as you can.

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    Last edited by EXI; 10-25-2010 at 09:11 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by extinct View Post
    Mone.... Just flip the m on it's side
    Word up I got a little lazy with the E on this one... the
    M sideways would definitely go good with the style...
    “Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”

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    Quote Originally Posted by EXI View Post
    use photobucket.com to upload your photos
    And i'll give you as much feedback as i can, i too am learning but am advancing because of this forum.
    Go simple, your bars are messed up, try to make all the letters same width and length etc, the O in the first one is smaller bars than the R. Think of bars this way:
    E has 4 bars, I has 3, H has 3 etc. Every letter is made up by bars. Just bite off of your computer and stay as simple as you can.
    Ok thanks man, that really helps I was thinking of it the wrong way and I'll deff work on the width and lenght

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    Quote Originally Posted by EXI View Post
    use photobucket.com to upload your photos
    And i'll give you as much feedback as i can, i too am learning but am advancing because of this forum.
    Go simple, your bars are messed up, try to make all the letters same width and length etc, the O in the first one is smaller bars than the R. Think of bars this way:
    E has 4 bars, I has 3, H has 3 etc. Every letter is made up by bars. Just bite off of your computer and stay as simple as you can.
    Ok thanks man, that really helps I was thinking of it the wrong way and I'll deff work on the width and lenght

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ratto View Post
    Ok thanks man, that really helps I was thinking of it the wrong way and I'll deff work on the width and lenght
    No problamo man! Just keep on doing simps, you'll know when your ready, once you have "decent" simps work on doing the filling. Pm me with your work if you wnat my crits!

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    @stuck i like your throwie and that cassie is pretty sick too like someone already said space it out better so the letters are so cramped.

    @EXI if you are looking for some high end markers check out prisma colors but if you want something a little cheaper but still professional check out copics, but right now dont worry about getting super nice markers crayolas work fine just work on your letter structure and your bars.

    i have spent 4 hours developing letters sketching them out doing the 3d and coloring it on this already so i dont want to fuck up im just looking for advice on a fill. i dont want specifics but im thinking cool colors would go well since it contrasts the warm in the 3d any thoughts on that? and crits on letter structure is always appreciated
    Last edited by Stigma02; 10-25-2010 at 10:56 PM.

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    On that piece that just did up there... I used shitty markers that I found at my work lol... The Black outline is a dico paint marker... the pink is a cheap highlighter that was loosing ink and going dead and the purple was also some cheap ass marker I stumbled upon lol
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    decided to do n old school peice.... and if anyone has seen this R before tell me cus after i drew it , i felt like i had seen it before, if it is a bite its unintentional



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    Very good, very creative


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    Quote Originally Posted by Stigma02 View Post
    @EXI if you are looking for some high end markers check out prisma colors but if you want something a little cheaper but still professional check out copics, but right now dont worry about getting super nice markers crayolas work fine just work on your letter structure and your bars.
    I don't need to work on simples.. Lol, I didn't even post anything, I was just asking Mogan.

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    haha ok then i was looking at the wrong person give me crits plzz!

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    Yo no hate stig but I dont really like it. theres awkward extenstions, theres alot of connections between letters that dont belong and your t looks like a cancer from the I. I'm guessing you dont wanna hear this but I wouldn't do fill on that at all. Draw another up make the improvements and fill that. your headed in the right direction though.
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    doodling and messing around on the book, playing mad scientist trying to experiment with some weird shit

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stigma02 View Post
    @stuck i like your throwie and that cassie is pretty sick too like someone already said space it out better so the letters are so cramped.

    @EXI if you are looking for some high end markers check out prisma colors but if you want something a little cheaper but still professional check out copics, but right now dont worry about getting super nice markers crayolas work fine just work on your letter structure and your bars.

    i have spent 4 hours developing letters sketching them out doing the 3d and coloring it on this already so i dont want to fuck up im just looking for advice on a fill. i dont want specifics but im thinking cool colors would go well since it contrasts the warm in the 3d any thoughts on that? and crits on letter structure is always appreciated
    your 3d is sick, pops alot
    phat that piece is pretty jazzy. i dig it


 

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