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    i heard you like the peen

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    ^ nah, and your just clogging the thread

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    ^ boutta change the position of and probably all of the C but , but yeah tell me what u hate/think could get better on this 1

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    Reach your shits alright but theres no flow whatsoever
    Last edited by SicK-; 12-15-2010 at 09:02 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ViniVidiVici View Post
    Would all of you shut the fuck up and stop starting all this motherfucking toy beef, HOLY SHIT! You'd think this forum was for old school kings or some shit NONE OF YOU ARE ABOVE CRITS!!!! And why the fuck would you ever tell someone to stop giving you crits, the way I see it none of you guys are above anyone else, you guys are all just horizontally different (I hope you can understand what I mean)

    Mone - clean as always, you're the only one who is consistent on this thread
    Reach- no man, no, stick with all caps or all lowercase, mixing an mashing looks sloppy, and if you are gonna mix and mash which I would not suggest make the e look exactly like the c then just add a middle bar
    Jester - those are both pretty bad, sorry but true. You're getting ahead of yourself when it's clear structure is what you need to work on
    Acrsk - the character is good but those letters are shit, just saying
    Word thanks good looking out my dude.

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    Mone i would really like to see you step a little outside of yer box. yer work is good and it is indeed consistent. what you do you've got on lock but i'd like to see it go a step further. just a suggestion

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    Quote Originally Posted by SicK- View Post
    Reach your shits alright but theres no flow whatsoever
    i think this statement is consdered an oxymoron...i say i think because i have no clue what the hell im talking about,...

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    rib cage- i like the style match the cross bars with all your letters the r,e,a,h... pull the A closer to the e, also if your going to put the little flips in the R,A,H put them in all the letters

    93- dope magic fresh

    mone- i like the same shit as always but the o does resemble a c. also the m's beginging is a little choppy

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    Im going to post a one-line bubble letter. when i get home. Doing one lines would probably help me with my bubble letters

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    Quote Originally Posted by M3KA1! View Post
    Mone i would really like to see you step a little outside of yer box. yer work is good and it is indeed consistent. what you do you've got on lock but i'd like to see it go a step further. just a suggestion
    I'm picking up what your puttin down

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    Hahaha
    Quote Originally Posted by ChadWarden View Post
    if your name sucks, it sucks. For example, you write cumstache-oner. if you have a dope style, then good for you, respect. but you still write cumstache-oner. and that's pretty fucking gay, bro.
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    You obviously have no concept of america's violence. It's called flexin'
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    DON'T HATE ON HlM MAN, HE'S DOING IT FOR HIMSELF.
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    haha wtf does this has to do with an age??cause u older u think ur awesome or some shit??

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    Quote Originally Posted by MoganOne View Post
    I'm picking up what your puttin down
    what am i puttin down? just the suggestion orrr??

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    Some old battles, etc. Old stuff in general






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    Quote Originally Posted by IbuprofenTablets View Post
    Shut the fuck up, I bet I'm better than you.

    I've been writing for about 5years, how about you?

    I'll show you some shit from when I started and I bet it's still better than your shit.

    u write 5 years and still u have shaky lines....

    @nos like ur last one

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    Any crits and ideas for a background is greatly appreciated.

    I dig the majority of that, Nose, although, watch your widths. And, on the Smart Went Crazy one, those things....are weird. You know what things I mean..

    Newt, pick a name that actually has some type of meaning to you, so that you will be more inclined to stick with it. And work on the throw a lott.

    YesNoMaybe - Work on simples.

    RibCage - Do keyboard letters/computer fonts.

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    dope fill kringe
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    kringe dopeness... i have no clue what you should do for a background tho...
    shit from the past couple of days... im not feeling my S or A or the 3d ... always looking for crits
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    Quote Originally Posted by Female View Post
    Im going to post a one-line bubble letter. when i get home. Doing one lines would probably help me with my bubble letters
    Ignore the D and the word at the bottom, I know the B is too small and the O is too big and the R is uneven. Feel free to crit, and the roundness is fucked.
    Last edited by Female; 12-16-2010 at 06:46 PM.

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    k yea just work on tryin to keep yer letters generally the same size and proportionate. then maybe work on the flow of the whole thing and the letter structure. yer "b" can do without the crosshairs and the "r" the dolla dolla bill sign. that shit just looks silly at this point. but keep workin at it

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    Kringe, is that your crew inside your piece? fresh.

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    Quote Originally Posted by M3KA1! View Post
    k yea just work on tryin to keep yer letters generally the same size and proportionate. then maybe work on the flow of the whole thing and the letter structure. yer "b" can do without the crosshairs and the "r" the dolla dolla bill sign. that shit just looks silly at this point. but keep workin at it
    Yeah i know i did it with only one line. so yeah ty for crit i'll work on it


 

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