k yea just work on tryin to keep yer letters generally the same size and proportionate. then maybe work on the flow of the whole thing and the letter structure. yer "b" can do without the crosshairs and the "r" the dolla dolla bill sign. that shit just looks silly at this point. but keep workin at it
Kringe, is that your crew inside your piece? fresh.
BORE ... keep illin highliter high hup i neeeda get me some
Nose-i like them all, and i really like the fill on that first
kringe-looks good to me man, although idk how i feel about that o being only half as big as the others
tasty-piece looks nice, the a and the R on the second throwie look pretty similar, although its not as bad on the 3rd, just work on that but youre headed in the right direction
Female-your letters get bigger as you go, and if youre gonna do mostly lowercase i'd do them all lowercase (the B), and like someone said id lose the random stuff for now and focus on your structure
Did this one for the most recent battle, lookin for some crits. Right bar of the N is a little small and this fill is kinda sloppy, but overall i like the way it turned out
fuckin wit some pens and markers
Some chit i'm workin on
Sorry about attachment(at school). i think this one is better than the other and what should i put inside of the letters. (having problems with the letter B) Might do another E is too big.
Last edited by Female; 12-17-2010 at 09:31 AM.
Mogan i love what your doing.
Female - define the letters with dots etc and its an ok starting point.
Female - Try doing straight letters now, with 3d.
Monerr- You should definitely do a whole piece with that black/green color scheme. On the bottom one it looks like you went a little big on your M and I think you can make that E look a little bit better
female i think he means like adding random shit inside the letters so u can read them with ease,like this...
some ugly shit i never posted
Mone - the colors and cleanliness of the first one are dope,the second one is fresh but the drips would have been better if they were less thick in my opinion,the character is proper
ian - the right bar of the n is huge ,should have kept it like the left bar and it would have looked alot more clean
ribcage - watch your bar width,dont put your 3d over your letters ....
yes - the only one that is pretty decent is the first one but you need to seriously go more simple stop trying to do crazy shit
nose - that nova peice is nice and im feeling that brutal peice just not the letter b or the 3d
soar - im feeling your throwup,but in my opinion a lowercase 'a' would suit it better..also fix that thing poping out on the left side of ur s,it looks strange
Last edited by FlippingChickens; 12-17-2010 at 02:06 PM.
u dont have to bump the pictures there right above your post ...and i think you should do anything YOU like even if people dont agree with it. Give me a minute ima do some throws for you just for kicks
the letter 'b' is annoying for throwups i agree...i sujest to take influence ( not bite ) from throwups you like and work your way up from there
Last edited by FlippingChickens; 12-17-2010 at 02:09 PM.
@Nose: Word I'm glad youliked the Black fill wit the green outline... I used a light green deco on the out line and a Micron for the fill... I want to do one with a red orange outline rather than a green naw' i mean...
Check this one... I like da E