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  1. #106361
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    Werm- your R in both of those seems a little big. I like your W's the most. Try to get crisper edges on the corners of the letters if you know what i mean
    ENKM- lolslolslolslolslolslolslolslolslols. that throw up is horrible, along with your handie. You need to be more critical of yourself, like more self conscious of your stuff. Your explanation for having bad or as you call it "simple" graffiti just doesnt really make any sense. You dont have to listen to me but you came on this site for crits so there they are

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gatsoi View Post
    @Clash E is a Vowel.
    Fuck my dumbass.

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    @thepekins ok what makes my throwie horrible??? throwies are supposed to be sumthin ou put up quick and fast they dont hafta be perfect
    @sick hahhh didnt use a ruler made lines with a pencil then went over with pen marker etc lolz :l
    just keep the crits comin im enjoying this its helpin a lot lol

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    Bro if you are going to get mad every time someone says your shit is bad (it is, all of it, not just your throw), then you might as well just quit right now.
    Throws are something to "put up quick" that reflects your style, like "this is how dope the shit I can pull off in a hot spot is", if it's bad then you are just making yourself look bad.

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    im not getting mad this is the prob i have on other sites everyone thinks i get mad :l but idk i just dont see what makes my stuff so bad..and no never gonna quit just not gonna happen this is sumthin i hafta work for

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    maybe you should change your name...i doubt you get up so it wouldn't be too big of a deal....usually when you fuck with different letters it really helps you progress

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    ive changed my same like 11 times and im pretty good with an E fairly good with N and K suck with M tho thats why most of the time lately i put up ENK

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    I would recommend picking something pronounceable

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    look man i dont think your getting mad or anything but just because a throwie is something to be put up quick doesnt mean it should look bad. fuckin shit dude, just admit your bad at graff. You are making reasons why having bad graffiti is ok. If you dont want to be good at graffiti thats cool but dont think youre anything close to good right now cus your stuff is really bad, it looks like youve been writing for two months at the most. Im not saying that as an insult or anything, its just true.
    Im mucchh better than you dude, but I still think that about 90% of my stuff is awful and the other 10% still isnt good.
    sorry for this stoned rant right now. Bottom line ENKM YOU NEED TO BE MORE CRITICAL OF YO SELPHHH

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    all the pronounceable onces are taken lolz ummm lemme think ERUV? ESKY? I want it to start with an E, EONS? EXUL? These are real words btw
    @thepekins the only thing i thought was good was my throwie and i am critical of myself im a perfectionist but obviously my stuff wasnt as good as i thought and come on im sorry but saying your better than anyone is like me saying it were ALL TOYS here all of us the only other thing i think is good is my one character i have
    Last edited by ENKM; 02-04-2011 at 04:50 PM.

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    im not saying im better than anyone. just you. its mad true i could paint a throw in a second that would be better than yours, but that was not the point I was trying to make dude. The point I was making is that saying im better than you isnt saying much. Im not saying im some hot shit or anything
    Last edited by thepekins; 02-04-2011 at 05:52 PM.

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    i dunno if this is a good time to post this lol. but im bout to fall asleep and i need some crits on this for the morning if you dont mind... i did it in about 5 minutes so yea i wanna work on it more
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    the R might be too small and the W too wide but thats my opinion.

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    Mippi-I like the simple look except the inconsistant outline on don't and the ending "a" on wanna. other than that and the kinda small "r" I like it.

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    Just kinda threw something together don't like it too much. Figured I'd ask you guys where you think I went wrong with this one.

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    ^you should drop the crazy fill and the crazy swirly extensions. I cant tell what the first letter is. Try to make straighter bars and dont waste all your black on that background.

    Mippi- dont do the little lines at the bottom of all the letters. And I would drop the swirls in your d,a,g,p.

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    could some one help me with a new name shoes isnt cuttin it

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    just gotta try different letters find out your fav letters then build a name from there

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    Quote Originally Posted by ghostwriter View Post
    could some one help me with a new name shoes isnt cuttin it
    A nice way to find a new name is taking a word and spelling it differently. For example i thought of the word telescope. Seperated scope, spelt it with a k. I liked it so stuck with it.
    Or you could literally just draw out a graf alphabet and stick together the ones you like the most, then arrange them into a word.

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    kinda gotta pick your name yourself. Do letters that you are good at. make sure no one else who is well known already writes it. thats about it


 

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