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    Quote Originally Posted by Dcicfhbimv View Post
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    Just kinda threw something together don't like it too much. Figured I'd ask you guys where you think I went wrong with this one.
    what the fuckkkkkk

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    thats nice killing

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    (an exchange for smooth nuts)



    everything i draw seems forced lately
    i need inspiration

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    Do drugs, man.

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    lmao i do man
    i went to a dubstep rave a couple weeks ago
    molly, random alc, smoking purple kush straight on the dance floor
    ate mushrooms the day after
    lol i even sell tree
    i need xanax something fierce
    my shit is all over the place without a calm structure
    lol if you notice my lines are kind of shaky

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    awh the swirls aren't working eh.

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    @thepekins sorry man but im gettin a lil sick off all your damn bragging i wanted crits but now your bragging very ignorantly
    @mippi i like how its simple but it needs some work in my opinion the n's look a lil funky and your r is a tad bit to small
    @fuckthefame i like the top one

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    new throwie shitty handie and character

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    shitty throwie too... only good letter is the n and only if it was standalone

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    throw some structured funk on that
    bombs are basically circles ENKM
    or at least for the style your attempting i think thats a good assumption

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    havent sketched in a minute, heres a quick one...crits would be appreciated
    Quote Originally Posted by ChadWarden View Post
    if your name sucks, it sucks. For example, you write cumstache-oner. if you have a dope style, then good for you, respect. but you still write cumstache-oner. and that's pretty fucking gay, bro.
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    You obviously have no concept of america's violence. It's called flexin'
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    DON'T HATE ON HlM MAN, HE'S DOING IT FOR HIMSELF.
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    haha wtf does this has to do with an age??cause u older u think ur awesome or some shit??

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    looks great in general, except the middle part of the W

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    yeah I've been tryin' to figure some shit out, but I've had writers block for a minute
    Quote Originally Posted by ChadWarden View Post
    if your name sucks, it sucks. For example, you write cumstache-oner. if you have a dope style, then good for you, respect. but you still write cumstache-oner. and that's pretty fucking gay, bro.
    Quote Originally Posted by Thrice View Post
    You obviously have no concept of america's violence. It's called flexin'
    Quote Originally Posted by Flawless Victory View Post
    DON'T HATE ON HlM MAN, HE'S DOING IT FOR HIMSELF.
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    haha wtf does this has to do with an age??cause u older u think ur awesome or some shit??

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    @fuckthefame so i should basically just make it flow better and all? like do have like a reference pic for throwies? that would be help like i dont see many throwies
    @phat2 any tips for the other letters?

    anyone have any tip on the character?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ENKM View Post
    @thepekins sorry man but im gettin a lil sick off all your damn bragging i wanted crits but now your bragging very ignorantly
    sorry mom. Didnt mean to make you angry. Ill just go to my room now

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    Zewl that is teh dopenesss

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    Quote Originally Posted by NosE2 View Post
    havent sketched in a minute, heres a quick one...crits would be appreciated
    overall i think thats the best i have seen from you yet.
    just an opinion but i would drop the diagonal bar lower on the z so it mirrored the L a bit more and the w is weak but i know how much of a pain in the ass they can be.

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    the w is weak but i know how much of a pain in the ass they can be.
    not when u think of them as just simply an upside down M hehe :P

    ENKM, go to the main forum and then into the throws/bombs thread and check out some photos there, draw some inspiration from dem big heads, see how they operate their machinery etc... for a starting point, I'd say just spend a good couple hours checking ot flicks, nothing more. find what you like and start practicing on a similar style.
    but in general, I'd say u need to structure your letters better, and give them better flow if u know what I mean, you probably have the idea in mind, but you need the practice

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    @Phat2 will do man ill be back when i think ive figured out sumthin good x) but thanks

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    Looking for some serious crits on this. no bullshit


 

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