yo jakro ,ewl,tempo, drop that shit your doing and do simple keyboard letters.
this is for Ian, little quickie
simp i just did, just learning straights
just starting out again after a bit of a break :P
my attempt @ "keyboard letters"
edit: dont connect your E to your M like that...and on the right bar make it like "l", dont slant it like that, make it like you did the left one....
work on that P and maybe try a square o
@Flat: work on that T, kind of looks like an F with that arrow...lose some of those arrows, they're pointles. On your A i dont know about that curve going through the top. And if your going to add the top of the A anyway, at least make it connect with the other bars...its a little off. The L is pretty good to me, except maybe the little extention on the top of it going off to the left...color it and see what it looks like
Last edited by NosE2; 02-22-2011 at 08:08 PM.
my armpit b.o. smell similar to fresh roasted coffee
tempo- that last one is on spot
crits always welcomed...
noise - looking good. everyone else that this applies to, use bars, keep them consistent. practice.
mixed it up wit lower cases