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    Tempo, you should try fattening up your letters, and also bringing them closer together.

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    Quote Originally Posted by chiefy View Post
    @Gatsoi
    looks nice but fill the e's hole in solid black the letter are nice and clean though
    @bomber boy
    take away all the arrows and other S*** and make the letters more simple
    @thatswhatshesaid
    have less gaps inbetween the letters and get rid of the background behind it
    @FlatScank
    the first was isnt that good too many arrows but the second one is way nicer letters are straight and look nice but the L looks too bent at the botom imo
    thanks for the crits chiefy probs just gunna take it back to the start and look at my letter strucutre cus my k's are so bad

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    Quote Originally Posted by FlatScank View Post
    wasn't directed towards you, was directed towards Tempo.
    o right my mistake

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    Crits, I know people said less arrows, but this is for a legal wall.
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    so, since you're painting it where people and other writers can see it, you decided to ignore everyone's advice and use arrows and retarded extensions?

    ditch all that stupid shit and just use your keyboard letters. if you really can't stand doing just straight letters then slant them or get a little creative, but ,seriously, stop what you're doing.
    Last edited by ChadWarden; 02-24-2011 at 11:30 AM.

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    No, that is a picture I believe there are other forums for that, we try to stick to graffiti on this forum....

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    That wasn't very nice, ViniVidiVici.
    Gnar, that's kind of a weird style that I cant really crit. But I can say that the R needs work if you were going to stay with that kind of style. And your N looks like a capital A. Fix that.
    And Flat, I think it looks nice. And even though you kept the arrows, there didn't seem to be near as many as on the other sketches, sooooo good job!

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    thanks man!
    @ Gnar, I like your G, you should work on that, and also your other letters, possible consider doing upper-cased letters?

    heres a sketch I did today, no arrows, Crits are always welcome.
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    i see the p, o are too small. but is this closer to keyboard letters?

    @ flat , that look different from ur others..
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rehz View Post
    Well Weedeater, Nose just told him that the square O would look better, so Tempo's probably a little confused now. And Tempo, when someone gives you their crits (assuming they're not being a dick about it), try to thank them or agree or say SOMETHING. When you write "k" it just kinda, ya know, uhmm, yeah. And about the O. With that one that weedeater's talking about, I think the square O goes well, because you've got a square kind of P. And just boxyy looking letters in general, but if you were to make everything more curvy and circular, obviously the sphere kind of O would be better.
    word, my bad, i was away for a few days, and didnt read the last few pages. and remember tempo, its just my opinion, the only reason i gave it is to give you an idea to go off of and coem up with something better. not saying thats the way it HAS to be done.

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    tempo- make your letters a lot closer
    Flat- your handie blows miniature - wooden- nutcracker dick. work on that shit. that L is wack and your 3-d is sloppy

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    here is my attempt at less space between wider letters.
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    your on a computer right? look at your keyboard and do those before you try bending and what not. straights then simps then piecing

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    This is like the blind leading the blind in here.....

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    JR
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    gnar - killing it

    flat - throw some color out there

    tempo - work on your letters more man

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    ^only good shit on this page, i really like the first 2

    this is what i did for the newest piece battle, lookin for crits. looks better in person TBH


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    revised my previous attempt.

    btw: nice work @ risk & youth with your colors
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    ^fuckouttahere with that, KEYBOARD LETTERS:


    TEMPO


 

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