Blackbooks

**Dcicfhbimv** · 02-24-2011 02:27 AM

Is that a crit a compliment or what? I really can't follow. And cmon leave Tempo alone.

Originally Posted by KRE1

cmon ho les see them tits that way ill know you aint takiin it the wrong way wen i say ur a fat fuggin pussy

and crack baby dcic are you on riddlin? the fuck ur shit look like you gonna die of a sugar overdose and your letters look like sperm.

**FlatScank** · 02-24-2011 04:16 AM

Tempo, you should try fattening up your letters, and also bringing them closer together.

**bomber boy** · 02-24-2011 10:12 AM

Originally Posted by chiefy

@Gatsoi
looks nice but fill the e's hole in solid black the letter are nice and clean though
@bomber boy
take away all the arrows and other S*** and make the letters more simple
@thatswhatshesaid
have less gaps inbetween the letters and get rid of the background behind it
@FlatScank
the first was isnt that good too many arrows but the second one is way nicer letters are straight and look nice but the L looks too bent at the botom imo

thanks for the crits chiefy probs just gunna take it back to the start and look at my letter strucutre cus my k's are so bad

**bomber boy** · 02-24-2011 10:15 AM

Originally Posted by FlatScank

wasn't directed towards you, was directed towards Tempo.

o right my mistake

**FlatScank** · 02-24-2011 10:45 AM

Crits, I know people said less arrows, but this is for a legal wall.

**ChadWarden** · 02-24-2011 11:27 AM

so, since you're painting it where people and other writers can see it, you decided to ignore everyone's advice and use arrows and retarded extensions?

ditch all that stupid shit and just use your keyboard letters. if you really can't stand doing just straight letters then slant them or get a little creative, but ,seriously, stop what you're doing.

**thatswhatshesaid** · 02-24-2011 12:55 PM

bored

**ViniVidiVici** · 02-24-2011 03:03 PM

No, that is a picture I believe there are other forums for that, we try to stick to graffiti on this forum....

**Rehz** · 02-24-2011 03:25 PM

That wasn't very nice, ViniVidiVici.
Gnar, that's kind of a weird style that I cant really crit. But I can say that the R needs work if you were going to stay with that kind of style. And your N looks like a capital A. Fix that.
And Flat, I think it looks nice. And even though you kept the arrows, there didn't seem to be near as many as on the other sketches, sooooo good job!

**FlatScank** · 02-24-2011 04:30 PM

thanks man!
@ Gnar, I like your G, you should work on that, and also your other letters, possible consider doing upper-cased letters?

heres a sketch I did today, no arrows, Crits are always welcome.

**Tempo718** · 02-24-2011 04:40 PM

i see the p, o are too small. but is this closer to keyboard letters?

@ flat , that look different from ur others..

**weedeater** · 02-24-2011 04:43 PM

Originally Posted by Rehz

Well Weedeater, Nose just told him that the square O would look better, so Tempo's probably a little confused now. And Tempo, when someone gives you their crits (assuming they're not being a dick about it), try to thank them or agree or say SOMETHING. When you write "k" it just kinda, ya know, uhmm, yeah. And about the O. With that one that weedeater's talking about, I think the square O goes well, because you've got a square kind of P. And just boxyy looking letters in general, but if you were to make everything more curvy and circular, obviously the sphere kind of O would be better.

word, my bad, i was away for a few days, and didnt read the last few pages. and remember tempo, its just my opinion, the only reason i gave it is to give you an idea to go off of and coem up with something better. not saying thats the way it HAS to be done.

thepekins · 02-24-2011 05:27 PM

tempo- make your letters a lot closer
Flat- your handie blows miniature - wooden- nutcracker dick. work on that shit. that L is wack and your 3-d is sloppy