Tempo, you should try fattening up your letters, and also bringing them closer together.
Crits, I know people said less arrows, but this is for a legal wall.
so, since you're painting it where people and other writers can see it, you decided to ignore everyone's advice and use arrows and retarded extensions?
ditch all that stupid shit and just use your keyboard letters. if you really can't stand doing just straight letters then slant them or get a little creative, but ,seriously, stop what you're doing.
Last edited by ChadWarden; 02-24-2011 at 11:30 AM.
No, that is a picture I believe there are other forums for that, we try to stick to graffiti on this forum....
That wasn't very nice, ViniVidiVici.
Gnar, that's kind of a weird style that I cant really crit. But I can say that the R needs work if you were going to stay with that kind of style. And your N looks like a capital A. Fix that.
And Flat, I think it looks nice. And even though you kept the arrows, there didn't seem to be near as many as on the other sketches, sooooo good job!
@ Gnar, I like your G, you should work on that, and also your other letters, possible consider doing upper-cased letters?
heres a sketch I did today, no arrows, Crits are always welcome.
i see the p, o are too small. but is this closer to keyboard letters?
@ flat , that look different from ur others..
tempo- make your letters a lot closer
Flat- your handie blows miniature - wooden- nutcracker dick. work on that shit. that L is wack and your 3-d is sloppy
here is my attempt at less space between wider letters.
your on a computer right? look at your keyboard and do those before you try bending and what not. straights then simps then piecing
This is like the blind leading the blind in here.....
^only good shit on this page, i really like the first 2
this is what i did for the newest piece battle, lookin for crits. looks better in person TBH
revised my previous attempt.
btw: nice work @ risk & youth with your colors