nose2: He's Been writing Mine for about 8 years now. I mean Ill tell him, but why :P? oh, And Kocka isnt for kocker, kocka, pronounced as kotska is cube in bosnian
and guys thanks for all the crits! and Phat 2, thanks man.. Ill finish up the piece and move it up somewhere on the forums, see what they have to say!
Dcicfhbimv: Not a style Im particularly familiar with, but i like it man!
Last edited by Kocka; 03-10-2011 at 07:06 PM.
yo thanks for all the crits, ill try and post a flick of a "better" peice tomorrow...
cube- i agree with everyone else, not a huge fan of the first but that second is wayyy beyond being conidered toy.
drive- that is the first pic from you that ive actually liked, keep that shit up, but your letter structure still could use some work, not bad tho/
Just working on coming up with some letters trying to stick to the whole bar thing. are the bars alright? figured I'd ask you guys I think I'm finally getting a grasp on the whole bar concept. And thanks Tasty.
soar- dont forget about our exchange... ill have yours up monday
and above^^- your basic bars are good... flexing them doesnt mean add wack connections everywhere... style comes naturally bitten or orginal, dont force it
just a little something i just did messing around, fitting letters together
any input?
make each letter the same width
use bars.
I don't have any markers to colour this in at the moment, the only thing i got is some 0.4mm penis(oops meant pens lol).
nah!...draw some blocks, or something like that
new sketch...
yo unique that shit is dope... only thing i think needs work is the E, but that just my opinion
New name, new crap!
I kinda ran out of room in the last one, oh well.
AZRM - I'm not feeling that bottom one. The last two letters are majorly thin compared to the first two, i know you said you ran out of space but you shouldve noticed when you pencilled it out lol. Not feeling that extension in the A either. I do like that middle one though, that whole chinese/japanese whatever thing is cool!
Dont know if the whole metal plate type thing i tried here was any good. Still reaching for new ideas and direction really.
random shit i been working on
unique - add some color
skope2 - dope forcefield would look cool with that
worm - first flik is solid
wtf kind of name is Azrm anyway dude...
my main crit to you would basically be to change it and find some better letters and something that can actually be PRONOUNCED right :P
unless its not the name youll be using to write and these are only random letter practice... then it's all cool
can you criticise please?
Last edited by Phat 2; 03-13-2011 at 07:11 AM.
dont use more bars than the letter contains, do simple letters. dont bother fooling around with crazy ideas and wildstyles.
hud - there is a guy who gets up around me on the side of buildings, he does panels that look like that but a little more organized and not crossing each other.
personnaly i see them and think, cool. but who cares if others don't, thats what he do. and he doit till its done.
thanks will do ill make a coupl more nd post them using less bars nd unnesicary shet
skope -looking at this one (with the metal) i think he would be a relatively easy piece to paint on a big enough wall, and the aftermath would defiantly be respectful. that is if it turns out on the wall the way it does on paper. lol i like it though. (IMO)Originally Posted by Skope2
I honestly am not in anyway qualified to crit you cause my work needs a lot of help too. but if there was one thing in particular it would be as I said in my last post, that crossing the lines without proper knowledge and training turns out looks a little discombobulated so I would say to help keep it looking organized don't cross the bars at all. ... yet
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