@Kocka- Start simple, man. Honestly, it doesn't look good in my opinion.
@Kocka- Start simple, man. Honestly, it doesn't look good in my opinion.
thanks for the reply man, but ive been writing for some time now :P. im just posting it here because it isnt finished, and the blackbook thread in the main forums doesnt allow unfinished pieces?
Ive been commented on by a lot of fairly well known artists from the benelux, and did some collabs :P. Im not trying to sound cocky, but Im not asking whether its good or not, Im just asking what you guys think..
though i do agree, now that i look at it, I actually dont like it that much either. Im just gonna do a new one.
I posted this already in the main blackbook thread:
any thoughts on this then maybe?
oh snap!
props cubes
keep gettin up man
but u know, a lotta sketches look bad without color, that last one would've just looked like a big bunch of mangled bars and extensions had it not had colors to define where the letters are.
I wouldn't wory about it tho... you cant win em all, u know that eh :> heh
you could stand to make the U bigger
i dig that fill.
@Sketchamus
nice work man ..like the chars
can i get some crits on this
Snapshot_20110407 by grinder13, on Flickr
Last edited by centrysam; 04-07-2011 at 07:13 PM.
yeah looks tight man, the lettering style is consistant and the shaded bubble effect on the 3d shadow looks heavy, the only thing that i might suggest is to make the top part of the final letter have a bigger extension so it extends at both the top and bottom similarly to the letter at the beginning, but overall its a very nice piece, im really feelin your lettering style, sound.
Any Crits? For my friends mixtape cover.
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Last edited by Beatjunkie; 04-08-2011 at 07:18 AM.
spy vs. spy from MadTV I believe
Extinct - the MA and E are dope, the D could use tome work but I'm not good at D's either... The A could flow better IMHO becuz it kinda throws the flow off with that tip
nah! - nice and simple yo! I like it keep it up; try to warp it some idk just do what u want wit the letters and still try to maintain some uniform bars structute ^_^
can I get some crits on this stencil?
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Its not spy vs spy. there faces are like cones and are clearly present. I'm thinking the old stranger danger posters.
yes it is spy vs spy but hes hiding in his jacket
I drew it out of a magazine when I was in HS
anybody have crits?
hit me up fot a battle
edit: I mean exchange our what ever
Last edited by T-jay; 04-10-2011 at 02:40 AM.
nice editing tempo
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