nice looking B2 there mippi
nice looking B2 there mippi
thnx bud. thinking it over the U is deccent the n throws it off a bit. still nice tho!
Just a simple and a toon i am working on... crits would help
Last edited by Phat 2; 04-20-2011 at 07:37 PM.
I like the d and the e but work on the bar at the top of your T and work on the last bar of the N<-- the part where the secound last bar connects to the last bar extends to far out as for the cartoon try and cleen things up a bit as for the secound quickie you put up i like it except for the secound half of the N and the T has no flow
thanks for the crit, yeah that was my first crack at that character, I have been evolving it for the past couple days and cleaning things up.. I think I just need to work on the N and T some more, I am having difficulties with the flow between those two letters.
Alright i havent sketched in a while and my style is changing a little bit please give me crits thanks
^^gotta work on them bar proportions homie and the W doesnt look right not being connected like that
Not really finished [obviously] but I'd figure I'd upload it anyway. Trying to get rid of the dead space inbetween the L and A.
^E's wack, arrow on the S is wack, and the way your S ends on the bottom is bad. I like your M except where it meets in the middle, looks like you tried to make it arrow shaped. And your 3d is off
new name? you like, ps. pink ran out
Shroomsh I'm obviously not as good as you and pretty much everyone but for what its worth I think its pretty cool the bottom of the S is a bit too fat tho I think
Alright I tried to just focus on making the bars better. What do you think?
I know the C is pretty off and the A is bad too.
Tried to do something with it but I think overall this is at least decent at being the same throughout.
BTW My first ones I was kinda trying to do something like this. Obviously I failed horribly.
Last edited by pez 1794; 04-21-2011 at 12:29 AM.
pez, you gotta start somewhere, persistance is the key, im not that great compared to the likes of other but i havent even been writing for a whole year yet, just takes a bit of hard work.. i like the distortion on the second piece, it would look good if you added a point of perspective in the center of the black piece for some 3d, like what ive done in my piece, keep it up
Thank god lol. I think I'm beginning to understand why my first set was so bad and how to improve.
Shroomsh - Yea I know what you mean, all but one of the first couple were from about a year ago. I think I just tried to hard without understanding how it all works. For these I was mostly just working on bars and general structure but thanks for the 3D idea I might try it on a later one.
Tasty - Thanks for the crits. Couple questions tho, when you say even out the height do you just mean the top one? Cause the 2nd one I purposely squeezed the middle. And when you say to fix the thickness do you mean like to make it the same for each letter, just bent or longer/shorter, or what?
Thanks for everyone who's helping me too. I know I'm annoying asking and posting a lot but I really need the help lol
Yes I know I'm a toy and everyone else is better then me. Quit pointing it out.
Some work i did during school. Crits please.
what does it say? u need to work on keyboard letters bro go simple
zers, everything's fine but the R. you need to practice it smore