pez, you gotta start somewhere, persistance is the key, im not that great compared to the likes of other but i havent even been writing for a whole year yet, just takes a bit of hard work.. i like the distortion on the second piece, it would look good if you added a point of perspective in the center of the black piece for some 3d, like what ive done in my piece, keep it up
like 1000X better mang! all you gotta do is even out the height of the letters (laying down horizontal lines prior to drawing helps) and fix up your bar thickness nd youll be ready to goOriginally Posted by pez 1794
Shroomsh I'm obviously not as good as you and pretty much everyone but for what its worth I think its pretty coolthe bottom of the S is a bit too fat tho I think
Alright I tried to just focus on making the bars better. What do you think?
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I know the C is pretty off and the A is bad too.
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Tried to do something with it but I think overall this is at least decent at being the same throughout.
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BTW My first ones I was kinda trying to do something like this. Obviously I failed horribly.
Thank god lol. I think I'm beginning to understand why my first set was so bad and how to improve.
Shroomsh - Yea I know what you mean, all but one of the first couple were from about a year ago. I think I just tried to hard without understanding how it all works. For these I was mostly just working on bars and general structure but thanks for the 3D idea I might try it on a later one.
Tasty - Thanks for the crits. Couple questions tho, when you say even out the height do you just mean the top one? Cause the 2nd one I purposely squeezed the middle. And when you say to fix the thickness do you mean like to make it the same for each letter, just bent or longer/shorter, or what?
Thanks for everyone who's helping me too. I know I'm annoying asking and posting a lot but I really need the help lol
Yes I know I'm a toy and everyone else is better then me. Quit pointing it out.
ya for height im meant the letters need to start and end close to the same, if you noticed that second one the first letter ends lower than the last letter. and as for the thickness, i mean make the bars within each letter (more or less) the sameThank god lol. I think I'm beginning to understand why my first set was so bad and how to improve.
Tasty - Thanks for the crits. Couple questions tho, when you say even out the height do you just mean the top one? Cause the 2nd one I purposely squeezed the middle. And when you say to fix the thickness do you mean like to make it the same for each letter, just bent or longer/shorter, or what?
Thanks for everyone who's helping me too. I know I'm annoying asking and posting a lot but I really need the help lol
Some work i did during school. Crits please.
what does it say? u need to work on keyboard letters bro go simple
zers, everything's fine but the R. you need to practice it smore
booyeah, shits gettin cleaner ever since i got these prismas
Ian - It looks pretty good, maybe separate the O and I a little bit more to make it flow better and the bottom of the E just looks off to me
Last edited by pez 1794; 04-21-2011 at 10:58 PM.
Yes I know I'm a toy and everyone else is better then me. Quit pointing it out.
Ian that looks sick
didn't know silver was so hard to use, i won't be making that mistake again
crits please
critty critty bang bang
i know my bars are off in spots, im still tryin to get the hang of this line thickening business, and the picture doesnt do it proper justice, looks better in real life, but im happy with the way it turned out
GETH work on keepin those bars consistent, also try to straighten out your letters more, theyre all goin off at weird angles, just doesnt look good IMO
^if your going to do a dark outline do make your second outline/forcefield or whatever it is you call it, a lighter color
word, its lighter in person so you can see it better but i gotchu
yup yup, and usually when i decide to put hash marks/lines/blocks of color in my 3d i make it a diiferent shade of the 3d color and I hardly ever use outline color for it unless its black and white... that 1 is more personal preference though
yeah dawg thats the first time i ever tried usin those
ian- 1st pic-drop some of the extensions, and dont bother connecting the letters (yet), other than that ts looking pre clean.
2nd pic-too many extension and bends in the letters... and imo it wouldve looked better with the I being seperate from the connection between the M and N... and the D is pre wack, sorry man
geth- your letters are leaning too far over, and shorten the top extension on the E and make the bottom extension on the G go farther.
dent- make your letter size more equal... your D and T need work, and your drop shadow is pre off.. but, your E and N are lookin pre good
new stuff, crits always appreciated
any crits on dis?...
ian - I notice an improvement in all your stuff, any painting recently?
tasty - why do we never see alot of color from you? otherwise bars have good consistent width.
dent - that is a good look, but is there any reason the n and t are smaller than the first 2 letters?
ewl - i'd say ur gettin a little better bit by bit but on this peice your t got too close to the h.
thanks... and ya i dont use colour because i wanted to get structure down... ill do a quick fill on some of those actually and re-post later
EDIT: im digging that tempo, my only complaint is the A doesnt look like an A and your L should be bigger... but keep it up
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