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    Quote Originally Posted by pez 1794 View Post
    Thank god lol. I think I'm beginning to understand why my first set was so bad and how to improve.

    Tasty - Thanks for the crits. Couple questions tho, when you say even out the height do you just mean the top one? Cause the 2nd one I purposely squeezed the middle. And when you say to fix the thickness do you mean like to make it the same for each letter, just bent or longer/shorter, or what?

    Thanks for everyone who's helping me too. I know I'm annoying asking and posting a lot but I really need the help lol
    ya for height im meant the letters need to start and end close to the same, if you noticed that second one the first letter ends lower than the last letter. and as for the thickness, i mean make the bars within each letter (more or less) the same

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    Some work i did during school. Crits please.
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    what does it say? u need to work on keyboard letters bro go simple

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    zers, everything's fine but the R. you need to practice it smore

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    booyeah, shits gettin cleaner ever since i got these prismas


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    Ian - It looks pretty good, maybe separate the O and I a little bit more to make it flow better and the bottom of the E just looks off to me
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    Ian that looks sick

    didn't know silver was so hard to use, i won't be making that mistake again
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    critty critty bang bang
    i know my bars are off in spots, im still tryin to get the hang of this line thickening business, and the picture doesnt do it proper justice, looks better in real life, but im happy with the way it turned out


    GETH work on keepin those bars consistent, also try to straighten out your letters more, theyre all goin off at weird angles, just doesnt look good IMO

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    ^if your going to do a dark outline do make your second outline/forcefield or whatever it is you call it, a lighter color

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    word, its lighter in person so you can see it better but i gotchu

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    yup yup, and usually when i decide to put hash marks/lines/blocks of color in my 3d i make it a diiferent shade of the 3d color and I hardly ever use outline color for it unless its black and white... that 1 is more personal preference though

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    yeah dawg thats the first time i ever tried usin those

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    ian- 1st pic-drop some of the extensions, and dont bother connecting the letters (yet), other than that ts looking pre clean.
    2nd pic-too many extension and bends in the letters... and imo it wouldve looked better with the I being seperate from the connection between the M and N... and the D is pre wack, sorry man
    geth- your letters are leaning too far over, and shorten the top extension on the E and make the bottom extension on the G go farther.
    dent- make your letter size more equal... your D and T need work, and your drop shadow is pre off.. but, your E and N are lookin pre good

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    any crits on dis?...

    ian - I notice an improvement in all your stuff, any painting recently?
    tasty - why do we never see alot of color from you? otherwise bars have good consistent width.
    dent - that is a good look, but is there any reason the n and t are smaller than the first 2 letters?
    ewl - i'd say ur gettin a little better bit by bit but on this peice your t got too close to the h.

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    thanks... and ya i dont use colour because i wanted to get structure down... ill do a quick fill on some of those actually and re-post later

    EDIT: im digging that tempo, my only complaint is the A doesnt look like an A and your L should be bigger... but keep it up

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    tasty i like ur shit for the soar i would put more spacing between the s and o as for the throws my fave is the far right
    tempo yeah fix up the l and a good work dude

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    the I is kind of hurting the flow, the PE flows really well together though, im feeling it.

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    yeah im seeing that now thanks bro


 

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