I know My E and D are a little off, But i work with what i had, thanks for crits. And my fill. yeahh its not the best either, I use crayola nigggga!
I know My E and D are a little off, But i work with what i had, thanks for crits. And my fill. yeahh its not the best either, I use crayola nigggga!
lol atleast you got colours brother, all i got is the mighty hb
thanks rask ill post some more stuff real soon
@Flat yo on the real for real the less shit you put on your letters the better it turns out. The little curvey/hook extensions you put on it look terrible(like on the top of the F, or the bottom of the T) your extension going out of the bottom of the F to the left is bad. The T looks like an E or an F waaay more than it looks like a T. your A would be dope if it didnt have those little hook extensions.
Yo you got can control on your painted shit but your letters are wack, you got to break out of the same formula of sketching, cause instead of changing you letters all your doing is changing wack extensions. On this one instead of wack arrows coming out of nowhere its wack hooks coming out of nowhere. Its frusturating when you see someones sketchs go to the wall and after people tell him his letters are wack he does the same damn thing everytime but different fill or 3D...don't waste your painting skill with wack lettering. Peace
the scanner made the bars look skinnier then they really are so with that in mind, crits please?
The E was pissin me off. soo i left it out this time. crits
^the thing is dude/kid gots decent can control, and seemingly paints with *****s that got skill, so its a shame that he aint gone listen... It dont take much to change a fuckin drawing... one these days hes gone listen to somebody right?
why does he even post here if he dont want crits. i personally dont wanna see the same shit over and over and over with a different fill / set of funky arrows or hooks.
just something i sketched up, please leave comments
i painted for the first time yesterday night. im as toy as it fuckin gets. i post here so i can get help developing my style and so i can as good as i can. thats what this thread's for aint it ? i aint comin aggressive at you brother im totally humble. im just speakin my mind. eitherway we can take this to chat if you want. this is blackbook. so ima make this post legit.
this was also for the MIND piece battle. the 3D is a flop and so is the D. any tips on the doing inside circles/shapes of O's D's P's etc ?
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allright, thanks. can you give me some pointers on this throwup... im sketching up some ideas for a bombing trip im planning
Is this red mash any good? wat should i do to make it better?
crits please
@cliff@atak bars, straight letters, use them. ready go. oh and if you dont know whats up with bars go to the new to graffiti thread.
Yo thanks ribcage for that advice. Can u explain the vanishing point a little more? Oh and thanks to phat2 for the tutorial.
ATAK & MASH/CLIFFJACKSON - first things first, you gotta try and make each letter the same size, otherwise they look outta proportion and it wont flow too good. im suprised someone hasnt already said the phrase ''KEYBOARD LETTERS!!!!'' so i will. this basically means, look at your keyboard, and write out your tag in block capitals, keeping them all the same size, just like your keyboard.
Last edited by LeanOne; 04-23-2011 at 10:04 PM.
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