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that shits dope but the W dont flow wit it
@rask top of your S is fucked up, dont really like the K... A is dope tho
hey rask im diggin the whole piece except the small e unless you always do that
Any crits? Just more shit i done at school.
@ hulk - give it 2 weeks of doin letter structure and see what happens...
Alright thanks man. Always love gettin tips from more experienced writers and PM me. i have a ? about the Trains in chi-townOriginally Posted by Tempo718
lol tempo prolly aint more experienced..........blind leading the blind.........
@sick uuh bar width is good till the R, that little leg looks ugly, arrow on the M kinda dumb imo, and your styled hand writing is wack, super sloppy. you and mewn have the same W... looks similar to zewlers dub too. also you always do the same letters... try to branch out a bit breh
Last edited by ribcage; 04-26-2011 at 05:17 PM.
lime green fill with a blue glow or maybe neon blue letters with silver accents
? just throwing it out there
How's this?
I know the top of the E is a little off but I could fix it with marker
Last edited by pez 1794; 04-25-2011 at 11:23 PM.
your 3d is buggin, you got the write idea on for beginners with a vantage point, but you don't want to ink all the vantage lines to the point, you want to mimic the letters lines for the 3d.. nahmean? reading that just confused myself....
postin pic for talk, just kind of adding color as i go... the lime green is out, goin with blues... im thinking light blue in the middle outlined by a dark blue with maybe some little fill details in purple or somethin.... idk what i want, except i know i dont want to fuck up and choose the wrong colors makin it look bad
wow thats a bad pic^^^ cant see the color... my b
My colors are lame
Ribcage, that Reach piece is filthy
thanks breh its been in the works for a minute...finally decided to take the time and finish
as for yours, your shits comin along. What i think you need to work on is structure and smoother bar transitions. The top straight part of the S goes into the middle curved bar unsmoothly but i think thats just an outline mistake. But the curve to straight extensions like on top of E and bottom left of S need to go. They dont fit in with the original structure of the letter. Your doin to much tryin to hard and forcin your shit. start with the basic letter form and leave out all the extensions until your letters are flawless... peace
ribcage just to make sure are you talking like this?
and about your piece I think those colors would look pretty good
Dankbudz all I can say for myself is I don't like the last letter. It's probably me but idk if it's a lowercase B or a D
Yeah, a few parts i just said "fuck it" and went on outlining.
Just drew out a quick sketch, you talking something like this?
last letter was a D.
D's are bitches to write.
and that diagrams got vantage point down.
@pez yeah like that, in some instances you can keep those lines and make it look good, but not for a simp/straight letter.
@sed yeah man that E is lookin waaay better, the bottom curve bar on the right side of that D should curve the other way, looks wack at the moment. and S's arent my strong point... i have a hard enough time comin up with them on my own. but uh at the moment yours doesnt fit well with E, the D might fit with it once you fix it though
also just realized on mine how I placed the piece retardedly, didnt place it in the center of page and if i would have the A wouldnt be squished in there... simple shit can turn something okay into something bad
Last edited by ribcage; 04-26-2011 at 12:31 AM.
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Your colors work a bit funky with the metal plating. Actually that's not even true. You asked for a crit, so I came up with bullshit. These are dope. Absolutely sick nasty dope. Grats.
Yo you need to loosen up a bit your bars look real stiff. try letting it flow better ya feel me?
Need some crits on this. feel like the E doesnt flow at all
Just some randoms in my little blackbook
-Rib looks good but i would maybe try move the legs of the R together or make the R a little bigger compaired to the H it look a little small
@ Pez: I'd listen to Ribcage on that one, few writers can have all the vanishing points, and make it look good, e.i Sohoe and Mozy from T.dot.
@ Ribcage, bars are good, but lacks movement.
@Werm, pretty decent, though some roundness in your letters wouldn't hurt (personal opinion)
@ Glums, throw those onto a wall, white fill, black outline/shade and red force, and your onto something.
Crits always welcome.
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