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    I've never tookin an art class or nothing, except for ceramics, i guess thats considered an art class, shits kinda cool. I was more talkin bout a history teacher tellin you to color somethin for points. Wtf does history and coloring have to do with each other

    Lol burnin a blunt my nig, it looks like an R and half an H+popeye at the moment. Will recommence the drawing once the blunts done... god damn ive posted a lot today... chatty cathy up in this bitch.

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    Werm thats not lookin too bad, idk if you were tryin to make some of the lines a lil shaky but theyd look better if they were smoother IMO, also the curviness of the E doesnt really fit in with some of those sharp points you got. Middle of the M is hurtin as well as the M's left bar and the bottom left of the W is a little funky. diggin the 3d though


    MEKO exchange, dont like my M and once again the color looks better in person but crits please?




    also im jealous of all you guys and your weed smokin, i havent smoked in like 2 months, just had to take a drug test yesterday for a summer job
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    That Meko piece looks fresh, only thing i would change is the middle of that M

    crits? trying to fiz up the sketch, the S is weird.
    or maybe its the E... damn im not sure

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    i like that bottom pencil S a lot, just fix the widths a little. the extension on the E and D look bad. looks like youve got simples down pretty well though, now instead of adding weird curvy extensions to plain straight letters try to just bend and angle the bars. dont put any extensions and dont change the bars from your simples, just angle them and possibly bend them slightly. not like that first D though, make it a smooth curve instead of a sharp angle. play around with your bars until you get somethin decent to work with. youre on your way though

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    SED- nice simp and what made you choose a three letter word?? usually just crews
    ian- looks cool but those stars are a no go i think sort of ruins it

    i know my size is off on the G and shit but im working on this sort of style now
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    wor kon that S way more, it ruins it

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    pointman, I dont really know what made me choose it, ill probably change it once i get the letters down and can actually paint it for a while. might change to SAID, but not any time soon.
    and for your throw i would just work on that S a bit.

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    I'm actually looking for crits on this

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    dont liek your W, and some your bars real screwy like at bottom of E. Arrow on W is wack, Random bar going into R is weird
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    Werm i think they pretty much nailed the big things the only thing i can say is keep it up and maybe do something different with the bottom of the last bar on your M
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    heres a really really really humble feeble city background attempt , comments?

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    sorry but no you and pure start over keyboard style letters you dont just start out in wild style that has to develop over a long time small development at a time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RERUN3 View Post
    thank u sir, and do u mean start over cuz thats cold bro
    yes... he means scrap everything you know about writing graff, and start from the beggining... its not cold, it is simply how one developes a "better" style

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    just messing around with a pen and makers...any crits?

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    M's and W's actually have slight different base structure M's are straighter where as W's have angled lines.... but essentially upside are the same...

    @ekaf E to K connection is wack. You still need to work on perfecting your bars

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    yes i do understand bars, just wanted to try something new
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    dude im lovin that...pretty fresh.
    If your uo for it ill exchange wit you.
    Any crits on this ballpoint freestyle?

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    Any good?
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    sen is a huge writer my man, maybe try a diff name


 

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