@ampt, are you talking about the top of the M? And if you are got any tips on how to fix it besides just making it more narrow. The only reason i ask is because if i do make the top more narrow it will look pinched/ squeezed, got any tips ?
@ampt, are you talking about the top of the M? And if you are got any tips on how to fix it besides just making it more narrow. The only reason i ask is because if i do make the top more narrow it will look pinched/ squeezed, got any tips ?
simpler structure. sloppy letters though.
SHUT you need to go back and work on simple letters. your letters are way out of portion in a bad way. There's no real flow your bars are Eh. The extensions and stuff on them looks accidental and sloppy like you didn't think it out. the top of the R is HUGE and doesn't work. the S fill kinda screws with its flow and makes it look ugly the right leg of the A gets all skinny and weird for no reason and the k is just tiny at top, huge at bottem and none of it flows right. Start completely over, start simple and bar that shit carefully. You can progress from there but you got a long way to go
yeah, i honestly spent no time on the last one. I shouldn't have posted it.
crits? I'm well aware of its shittiness I just wanted some specific pointers from some real writers....
those last few pages made me laugh
self crits, I dont like the extension on the E's and the R needs some work.
If yall got any crits im down to hear what you think
Dank your style looks alot like ribcages..
Finished piece from before, and a cholo!
Skope the only thing I can really see is that T in the first one isn't really working. Definitely stick to the second one.
Dank you have your simples down for sure, should try adding some flare.
Everyone else on this page, go back to simps.
Shit that got doodled up yesterday. That T is driving me fucking insane. Even worth doing a fill?
I hate my name.
lol facebook image code... i wonder who it could be?Originally Posted by dave the pirate
after messing with the link i got this
http://www.facebook.com/rachelle.davis
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more pics
Last edited by nah!; 06-14-2011 at 02:00 PM.
Are you using oil pastels to fill?
gotta go over it again with a fine liner and maybe the dark brown once more to make it a bit darker.
no stadelerefdsgsgf fineliners (0.3mm)
Skope- hows my style look like ribs? i dont even think i got style yet and nothin close to his. but hit me up with why you think so.
I R has no stylez
rough draft to how ima burn jiska? only show in pm for 500 dolla
Last edited by ribcage; 06-14-2011 at 03:07 PM.
Five hundred dolla!
Messing around in my friends collage book.
Rib, from what ive heard jiska used to do yards until he got caught, he will understand when i say how crazy the security guards are over there...takes balls i only have respect for this guy
^am I disrespecting him? Im just playin, sheesh. When did every1 on this site turn into a pussy? I guess I inadvertently insulted him or something when I was tellin that 1 kid to shut up, didnt mean nothin by it. But he got butthurt about it.
It should be a good battle, or i wouldnt have thrown the idea out there caue i aint gonna waste my time on a battle that i could easily win ya dig?
anyways your L's are kinda off, and that A is seriously hurtin. Diggin them cloudy letters at the bottom tho. youse gettin better
it's going to be a good battle, we used a little bit of trash talk but in the end no arm has been done...the trash talk only makes us do better stuff.
bumping for crits... and sorry never got around to posting the battle flick, got krunk instead
I'd maybe make the T a bit narrower and then let the E overlap the horizontal bar of it. Could look a lot better that way. Also keep your letter height consistent. The tops of the letters line up well but the bottoms don't at all.
@Tasty, not bad man, but I'd probably make the circle in the R a tad bigger so it could connect to the vertical bar a little lower. That could help it look a little less awkward. Besides that, just try mixing it up a bit more between sketches. Your letters and extensions are almost the same in both of those which can keep you from improving, ya know?
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