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    crits? I'm well aware of its shittiness I just wanted some specific pointers from some real writers....Name:  Photo on 2011-06-13 at 23.06 #2.jpg
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    those last few pages made me laugh

    self crits, I dont like the extension on the E's and the R needs some work.
    If yall got any crits im down to hear what you think

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    Dank your style looks alot like ribcages..
    Finished piece from before, and a cholo!
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    Skope the only thing I can really see is that T in the first one isn't really working. Definitely stick to the second one.
    Dank you have your simples down for sure, should try adding some flare.
    Everyone else on this page, go back to simps.

    Shit that got doodled up yesterday. That T is driving me fucking insane. Even worth doing a fill?
    I hate my name.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dave the pirate View Post
    Dont like this photo it looks weird cuz part of the peice is in the middle of two pages what eves just posting

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    lol facebook image code... i wonder who it could be?

    after messing with the link i got this

    http://www.facebook.com/rachelle.davis

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    more pics


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    Are you using oil pastels to fill?

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    gotta go over it again with a fine liner and maybe the dark brown once more to make it a bit darker.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Skope2 View Post
    Are you using oil pastels to fill?
    no stadelerefdsgsgf fineliners (0.3mm)

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    Skope- hows my style look like ribs? i dont even think i got style yet and nothin close to his. but hit me up with why you think so.

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    I R has no stylez

    rough draft to how ima burn jiska? only show in pm for 500 dolla
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    Five hundred dolla!

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    Messing around in my friends collage book.

    Rib, from what ive heard jiska used to do yards until he got caught, he will understand when i say how crazy the security guards are over there...takes balls i only have respect for this guy
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    ^am I disrespecting him? Im just playin, sheesh. When did every1 on this site turn into a pussy? I guess I inadvertently insulted him or something when I was tellin that 1 kid to shut up, didnt mean nothin by it. But he got butthurt about it.

    It should be a good battle, or i wouldnt have thrown the idea out there caue i aint gonna waste my time on a battle that i could easily win ya dig?

    anyways your L's are kinda off, and that A is seriously hurtin. Diggin them cloudy letters at the bottom tho. youse gettin better

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    Quote Originally Posted by ribcage View Post
    ^am I disrespecting him? Im just playin, sheesh. When did every1 on this site turn into a pussy? I guess I inadvertently insulted him or something when I was tellin that 1 kid to shut up, didnt mean nothin by it. But he got butthurt about it.

    It should be a good battle, or i wouldnt have thrown the idea out there caue i aint gonna waste my time on a battle that i could easily win ya dig?

    anyways your L's are kinda off, and that A is seriously hurtin. Diggin them cloudy letters at the bottom tho. youse gettin better
    it's going to be a good battle, we used a little bit of trash talk but in the end no arm has been done...the trash talk only makes us do better stuff.

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    bumping for crits... and sorry never got around to posting the battle flick, got krunk instead
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    Quote Originally Posted by lawlcat View Post
    I'd maybe make the T a bit narrower and then let the E overlap the horizontal bar of it. Could look a lot better that way. Also keep your letter height consistent. The tops of the letters line up well but the bottoms don't at all.

    @Tasty, not bad man, but I'd probably make the circle in the R a tad bigger so it could connect to the vertical bar a little lower. That could help it look a little less awkward. Besides that, just try mixing it up a bit more between sketches. Your letters and extensions are almost the same in both of those which can keep you from improving, ya know?

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    Quote Originally Posted by TastyMcNasty View Post
    bumping for crits... and sorry never got around to posting the battle flick, got krunk instead
    nah man def not feeling it
    go back to simple letters cause the extencions are mad wack
    im just being real

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    Dont like the first one was pretty high on 420 what ever tho


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    Quote Originally Posted by dave the pirate View Post
    Dont like the first one was pretty high on 420 what ever tho
    Well a 24 hour purple kush diet could indeed have something to do with that
    I like the 2nd more than the first because the letters are consistent and it has more flow. The N is slightly bigger than the rest of the letters but it's almost unnoticeable, and the 3D on the arrow off the K is much wider than the rest of the 3D. On the first one the letters kept getting wider and taller as you went, and I'm not really feeling the multiple arrow extensions off the N and the K but you don't like the piece either so fuck it. Keep it up, I can smell some good things in the near future from you.


 

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