Alright ribcage thanks for the advice. I feel what your coming from so tomorrow I'll post some stuff. And Satan I hope that outline is nice haha good luck in your battle
Alright ribcage thanks for the advice. I feel what your coming from so tomorrow I'll post some stuff. And Satan I hope that outline is nice haha good luck in your battle
Alright double posting mofuckas. And uhhh bump? Here's everything I got, not many BB pieces. At all. Only two lol
http://imageshack.us/g/718/5983596252cb3ed13c16.jpg/
sol your throwies are sick.
unfinished sketch. letters suck
I'm lazy...
That bottom arrow is all kinds of ugly hahaha
Last edited by MakeItTakeIt; 08-05-2011 at 04:39 PM.
FREE DKAY
Originally Posted by weakfingers
@sol thake those extensions of you pieces and keep your bar widths the same and your stuff will look alright
Thanks skeletor haha. And yeah nah I been having that problem alot. I met the only other real writer in my area and he told me to fix that too. Lol if I get time to sketch tonight I'll try and do something decent.
takeitmakeit, back to the drawing board dude... not even close to being ready for all those extensions. sorry.
Last edited by Phat 2; 08-05-2011 at 06:19 PM.
My round robin entry. Feel free to crit. I flipped the A to eliminate negative space on the upper part of the letters between the L and the S, even with an extension on the top of the A is still looked too open for me.
flashback
I smoke Vega
allright i need me a tag master with not much to do tonight. iwanna concentrate tonight on tags trying to get something that works
That looks good to you? Honestly? You have no structure what so ever.
everyone in this thread needs more arrows.
crits?
Why is that the theme of every one of your posts lately? Constant hate when your shit is weak too. Check yourself.
@Kidz - The top and bottom piece are your best because the letters have actual structure to them, although they need some work too. The char's are pretty dry too. Keep at it though.
old battle sketch....hopen im aloud in this page ha
Last edited by sema; 08-06-2011 at 09:37 AM.
did this after I got home with some pens i had in my socks
I smoke Vega
arrows are the shit, you hatin on them? i aint spreadin no hate. and i know my shit is weak... thats why i post in this forum
kids - looks to blobby and need to stick to the basics. gettin too ahead of urself man.
tempo - didnt quite nail it but it has potential. right now i feel you are in that awkward teenager phase but like in style, if that makes any sense. because that's how i feel about myself. when you establish your own thing, and do what you do and be good at it, i think you'll know
btw bump, need more feedback. thanksies
Last edited by Fluffy Bunnies; 08-06-2011 at 04:41 AM.
th kidz nothing against you, this might just be me, but your characters give me an irrational anger. i reeealllyyyy dont like em
I fucking love arrows
i also think fluffy bunnies and shit outta luck are fucking brilliant usernames
kilsr- i like it nice and easy i think the r is a bit fat tho
Tempo- i like the last one you did i think your letters look better if they are a bit fatter to be honest, like your ends on the letter t in one of the first ones on this page...where they sort of thin down to a point i don't think it looks so good....leave them a bit fatter i think it will look better yo
The kidz- same sort of thing on the middle too fatten them letters up a bit and the dos one's better and i like the afro dude on the bottom one, just need a little more time taken to neaten the letters up and outlines i reckon....bits and pieces like that but the dos ones are defo better than the middle too....to much overlapping and stuff for me personally
can i get any opinions on this one please, the overlap on the e pisses me off grr!! :
kidz-that first piece is ok but the ones that say power look like shit. get rid of the extensions/connections and do keyboard letters.
kilsr-thats pretty dope the only thing i can even think of for crits is the the little i and l look kinda weird next to each other. i like it tho.
bmore-its good the only thing i can say is the top and bottom legs of the B and R should be one continuous bar, not two different ones like you have them now.
tempo-is your friends name oahi?
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
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