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    takeitmakeit, back to the drawing board dude... not even close to being ready for all those extensions. sorry.
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    My round robin entry. Feel free to crit. I flipped the A to eliminate negative space on the upper part of the letters between the L and the S, even with an extension on the top of the A is still looked too open for me.


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    allright i need me a tag master with not much to do tonight. iwanna concentrate tonight on tags trying to get something that works

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    That looks good to you? Honestly? You have no structure what so ever.

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    everyone in this thread needs more arrows.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fluffy Bunnies View Post
    everyone in this thread needs more arrows.
    Why is that the theme of every one of your posts lately? Constant hate when your shit is weak too. Check yourself.

    @Kidz - The top and bottom piece are your best because the letters have actual structure to them, although they need some work too. The char's are pretty dry too. Keep at it though.

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    old battle sketch Name:  Picture006.jpg
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    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Why is that the theme of every one of your posts lately? Constant hate when your shit is weak too. Check yourself.

    @Kidz - The top and bottom piece are your best because the letters have actual structure to them, although they need some work too. The char's are pretty dry too. Keep at it though.
    arrows are the shit, you hatin on them? i aint spreadin no hate. and i know my shit is weak... thats why i post in this forum


    kids - looks to blobby and need to stick to the basics. gettin too ahead of urself man.
    tempo - didnt quite nail it but it has potential. right now i feel you are in that awkward teenager phase but like in style, if that makes any sense. because that's how i feel about myself. when you establish your own thing, and do what you do and be good at it, i think you'll know

    btw bump, need more feedback. thanksies
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    th kidz nothing against you, this might just be me, but your characters give me an irrational anger. i reeealllyyyy dont like em

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    I fucking love arrows
    i also think fluffy bunnies and shit outta luck are fucking brilliant usernames
    kilsr- i like it nice and easy i think the r is a bit fat tho
    Tempo- i like the last one you did i think your letters look better if they are a bit fatter to be honest, like your ends on the letter t in one of the first ones on this page...where they sort of thin down to a point i don't think it looks so good....leave them a bit fatter i think it will look better yo
    The kidz- same sort of thing on the middle too fatten them letters up a bit and the dos one's better and i like the afro dude on the bottom one, just need a little more time taken to neaten the letters up and outlines i reckon....bits and pieces like that but the dos ones are defo better than the middle too....to much overlapping and stuff for me personally
    can i get any opinions on this one please, the overlap on the e pisses me off grr!! :

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    kidz-that first piece is ok but the ones that say power look like shit. get rid of the extensions/connections and do keyboard letters.
    kilsr-thats pretty dope the only thing i can even think of for crits is the the little i and l look kinda weird next to each other. i like it tho.
    bmore-its good the only thing i can say is the top and bottom legs of the B and R should be one continuous bar, not two different ones like you have them now.
    tempo-is your friends name oahi?
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    bmore, i assuming maryland? shoot me a pm i live right by there, but interesting style not a huge fan of it but it does look nice with that color
    phat2 , nice straight letter, i love it in straights when the A is upside down lol

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    Bmore, if your from maryland shoot me a PM too. lol. I'm from around there too. And nice colors but as aeso said, the B should be one continous bar, not two separate ones. And cker, thanks for the compliment! I love my name haha

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    everyone on this page look at fluffy simple clean Strait get some letters down first
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    I could say the same for you. I especially don't like the extension on the bottom leg of the R. But nice fill

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    thanks for the crits. the one's that say power are pretty old and the pos one's are newer.
    ars; i'm lovin the color scheme
    phat; i'm really likin the splatters


 

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