Blackbooks

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

I fucking love arrows
i also think fluffy bunnies and shit outta luck are fucking brilliant usernames
kilsr- i like it nice and easy i think the r is a bit fat tho
Tempo- i like the last one you did i think your letters look better if they are a bit fatter to be honest, like your ends on the letter t in one of the first ones on this page...where they sort of thin down to a point i don't think it looks so good....leave them a bit fatter i think it will look better yo
The kidz- same sort of thing on the middle too fatten them letters up a bit and the dos one's better and i like the afro dude on the bottom one, just need a little more time taken to neaten the letters up and outlines i reckon....bits and pieces like that but the dos ones are defo better than the middle too....to much overlapping and stuff for me personally
can i get any opinions on this one please, the overlap on the e pisses me off grr!! :

[aaesoo]

kidz-that first piece is ok but the ones that say power look like shit. get rid of the extensions/connections and do keyboard letters.
kilsr-thats pretty dope the only thing i can even think of for crits is the the little i and l look kinda weird next to each other. i like it tho.
bmore-its good the only thing i can say is the top and bottom legs of the B and R should be one continuous bar, not two different ones like you have them now.
tempo-is your friends name oahi?

[Phat 2]

[mista_dza]

bmore, i assuming maryland? shoot me a pm i live right by there, but interesting style not a huge fan of it but it does look nice with that color
phat2 , nice straight letter, i love it in straights when the A is upside down lol

[Shit Outta Luck]

Bmore, if your from maryland shoot me a PM too. lol. I'm from around there too. And nice colors but as aeso said, the B should be one continous bar, not two separate ones. And cker, thanks for the compliment! I love my name haha

[sema]

everyone on this page look at fluffy simple clean Strait get some letters down first

[Shit Outta Luck]

I could say the same for you. I especially don't like the extension on the bottom leg of the R. But nice fill

[The Kidz]

thanks for the crits. the one's that say power are pretty old and the pos one's are newer.
ars; i'm lovin the color scheme
phat; i'm really likin the splatters

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

Thanks for the crits gang, all noted for the next bit of sketching
phat i love that its tight....whats with everyone doing the upsode down letter a's right now though?

[Phat 2]

yeah i noticed someone else did it too recently. can't remember if it was MN nice, or tempo or erm... can't remember his name, the dude with the red deadmau5 avatar.
I've done it a couple times now, I like it, got the original idea from mark ecko's getting up a couple years ago, the A's structure is basic, but I'd like to admit I reference JA with it... I'm also contemplating going all ghost ris soon and doing the whole upside down pieces and backwards and sideways and all that shit... ghost's one of my favorite bombers man

[MN Nice]

My round robin entry. Feel free to crit. I flipped the A to eliminate negative space on the upper part of the letters between the L and the S, even with an extension on the top of the A is still looked too open for me.

Yeah it was me lol bump for crits

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

That was it^^^ I quite like that, sorry mean to crit this one actually...i like the background really sets the letters off but i think a little more use of lighter and darker shading on the blue would have made those letters pop out like mad! and i think the 3d is a little tiny bit off but i think thats with attention to detail like on the e you got one fatter bit of 3d and then the middle bar of the e has a thinner bit of 3d........but i'm just being picky i think
do like the letters think the s needs to have more level gaps in it though
again just being a pickey ass mo-fo lol

[ribcage]

ace-k why u steal my bg? lol jk...

[Mc Satan]

i know this is not 100% the right place but, tag thread is moving to slow, and for some reason they do not know what crit is. so mind giving me some opinions on these 4?

[MN Nice]

Thanks for the crits bandit

Get that isht out of here Satan. Theres no need to post every single tag you try. Keep writing, try to find one that YOU like. One that YOU'RE satisfied with, not us.

[Mc Satan]

@MN nice to be honest any crits would be nit picking that piece is simple solid and pretty damn nice

[sema]

everyone on this page look at fluffy simple clean Strait get some letters down first

bottom page bump

[lawlcat]

and for some reason they do not know what crit is.

I just fucking told you in the tag thread to keep them simple and write it over and over again to develop style... Those are the EXACT same tag four times and you're just slowly devolving the shitty P into a shitty F, so you're first move would be stop that. Keep it simple and it will come.

Consider that a crit?

[EWL24]

these r a couple weeks old, but iv been out of town so i haven't gotten around to finishing them yet. Crits please

Mc Satan - i agree with lawlcat those are all the exact same tag, try something different

[MN Nice]

Clean work Ewl. Only thing bugging me about the top one is the W closing inwards on the top. Not too good looking. The second piece is meh. Connecting all the letters ruins it for me and the L is practically an i since its connected with the cross bar of the A. Pretty cool char though. Give your pieces some color too.