i wish i had my camera, shitty laptop flick does it no justice...
i wish i had my camera, shitty laptop flick does it no justice...
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Originally Posted by Arose.One
lol you drew a dragon and shit. You best color it before you take another pic.
Last edited by Tempo718; 08-11-2011 at 06:29 AM.
I smoke Vega
reach= if u wanna do the c try doin the e too
toop= i like the 2nd n 4th real clean nice structure
tempo - to pointy, dont like it
reach - hmm i like it cause everyone is expecting that you did the A.
Last edited by sadgeh; 08-11-2011 at 09:06 AM.
just a simple... crits
sema.. youve posted that bottom piece before.
but try outlining your top piece with black, see how that looks, should make that teal really pop
thx man usually the stuff i paint turns out nothing like that tho lol since i freehand all painted shit unless its legal
@sekn work on keeping all your letters on one angle if you're gonna lean them to the left or something. it kinda seems like they're starting to straighten up as the piece progresses. your shadows off in some places too. good keyboard letters tho, but your S and N look a little disproportional
@acer that piece is sick although i don't really like the c just because the extentions kinda make it look like a G. and like the other dude said throw a black outline on the top piece
@reach that C should be straight its too rounded off for the rest of the piece. the extensions kill it too, especially on the H
@sir2you i like the fade and teos pieces on top, only thing i can say is the F seems a little too Far away from the rest of the letters. i like the bottom piece too i'd say thicken up the t tho and the K seems xrushed between the pedestal and O
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
thanks homie, i was lookin for crits and got no one gave me any, so its appreciated.
i'll colour it later, looks like a laptop flick is as good as it gets at the moment >.>
fucked up the R and the I >:[
Last edited by TastyMcNasty; 08-11-2011 at 11:33 AM.
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
thanks for crits outline n a few scattered bubbles from behind set it off, i know i posted the 1 be4 its just same page. ill post the flik of the black when i fix this fkn scanner.
-sekn try given the letters some motion in the next one
-nasty shts tight like the vanishin point to the dragon some colourin will def make it pop
i don't write this i saw a tag on the street and used the letters in a piece
bump fo' crits
Drew this while bored.
ESCE - Make your middle bar come out more in your E's
sema - I can't even see that.
KAST - Work more on your bars before you push shit outwards and do different stuff. Also, take off the highlights.
EMACE - Some of it is kinda sloppy, like the first A. It's alright.
SOL - The only letter I can make out is the S. Don't connect letters yet.
BEK - I don't like your extensions on the B or how it connects to the E. Otherwise it looks decent.
2LIVES - L is too tall, and I overall don't really like it, but nothing specifically I don't like about it.
The forests of Timber have changed.
But the owls are still around.
^^ thanks for the crit on the 2 lives fury
ok i can't tell what half of those letters are but i do like the general shape to them and the flares on the ends of them...well you do them better than i do put it that way
i think minor details like bar thickness/thinness in places and the characters tooth that is higher up and a bit off on the right handside it kinda draws my attention to it not being level
maybe i have obsessive.complusive.disorder i'm not sure lol
nah- noice!! 1's a bit pap though arrrh kid!
tasty- i really like that actually, nice style on the letters
graff 2k- you see how nice it looks when you first look and then you see the s trying to hump the e a little bit more than the k and the n, i reckon a bit more even space on the first two would be banging or alternatively tighten it up and pull the k and the n back in as close as the s and e
sema-i like it overall, but i think you slightly have the same problem i have as you get in to drawing a word or whatever the letters get bigger as you go along...watch out for doing that and yes take a less blurry one next time
think i'm getting like lush in my old age more decrepied and perverted lol, i know its shit but i like to share my cock drawings:
^^^ someone watchin superbad bahaha jus playin thanks for crits
OHHHHHHH hahahaha that was MEAN !!!
I'm not sure he got it though
hmm i think it would of looked better if each letter was a single PENIS or the whole piece was a single PENIS
kinda like this
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