Last edited by Tempo718; 08-11-2011 at 06:29 AM.
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reach= if u wanna do the c try doin the e too
toop= i like the 2nd n 4th real clean nice structure
tempo - to pointy, dont like it
reach - hmm i like it cause everyone is expecting that you did the A.
Last edited by sadgeh; 08-11-2011 at 09:06 AM.
sema.. youve posted that bottom piece before.
but try outlining your top piece with black, see how that looks, should make that teal really pop
@sekn work on keeping all your letters on one angle if you're gonna lean them to the left or something. it kinda seems like they're starting to straighten up as the piece progresses. your shadows off in some places too. good keyboard letters tho, but your S and N look a little disproportional
@acer that piece is sick although i don't really like the c just because the extentions kinda make it look like a G. and like the other dude said throw a black outline on the top piece
@reach that C should be straight its too rounded off for the rest of the piece. the extensions kill it too, especially on the H
@sir2you i like the fade and teos pieces on top, only thing i can say is the F seems a little too Far away from the rest of the letters. i like the bottom piece too i'd say thicken up the t tho and the K seems xrushed between the pedestal and O
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
thanks homie, i was lookin for crits and got no one gave me any, so its appreciated.
thanks for crits outline n a few scattered bubbles from behind set it off, i know i posted the 1 be4 its just same page. ill post the flik of the black when i fix this fkn scanner.
-sekn try given the letters some motion in the next one
-nasty shts tight like the vanishin point to the dragon some colourin will def make it pop
i don't write this i saw a tag on the street and used the letters in a piece
^^ thanks for the crit on the 2 lives fury
ok i can't tell what half of those letters are but i do like the general shape to them and the flares on the ends of them...well you do them better than i do put it that way
i think minor details like bar thickness/thinness in places and the characters tooth that is higher up and a bit off on the right handside it kinda draws my attention to it not being level
maybe i have obsessive.complusive.disorder i'm not sure lol
nah- noice!! 1's a bit pap though arrrh kid!
tasty- i really like that actually, nice style on the letters
graff 2k- you see how nice it looks when you first look and then you see the s trying to hump the e a little bit more than the k and the n, i reckon a bit more even space on the first two would be banging or alternatively tighten it up and pull the k and the n back in as close as the s and e
sema-i like it overall, but i think you slightly have the same problem i have as you get in to drawing a word or whatever the letters get bigger as you go along...watch out for doing that and yes take a less blurry one next time
think i'm getting like lush in my old age more decrepied and perverted lol, i know its shit but i like to share my cock drawings:
^^^ someone watchin superbad bahaha jus playin thanks for crits
^^ oh i'm so glad...i fucking love lush! he's my style of bansky, and thanks sema lol
and nah i'll bear that in mind the next time i do any penis related shit haha
uncolored, plan on coloring it somehow. looking for crits on cracks / ideas for extensions. my letter game is decent so I'm trying to delve into the process of learning extensions.
same-no cracks, dont connect your letters, get a clean smooth line n structure before you try to overstep your means