widen up letters, drop that T, make the S less curvy, M is tight. make other letters similar to M
make your letters even big.
@ dank buds... nice flick ..looks good
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Humr your throws are pimp.
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Amen, i haven't written in forever my lines are shaky and my fills kinda whack im tryin to figure out my prismas again on the 3-d but anyways crits always appreciated
centry- you got your own style which is good but it seems like you need to slow it down a little and get some structure make it more legible
dank- shits clean looks really good
alby- simples man you gotta learn bars make all your lines proportional
if rugby were easy it would be called soccer
Knox - A few things I dont like about it. The letters seem to get smaller as it goes through (maybe youve taken the picture at an angle) and theres a few extensions that aren't working. The one at the bottom left of the A and the bottom right of the M, they just make it look alot less clean that it could be.
That E is fucking fresh though. Same with the A if it didnt have that extension.
women despite being pretty, are always problems sooner or later so if we all work together we can nip their bullshit in the bud with minimal controversy.
yea i like dat fruite looks real tight, nice colours aswell
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Humr - coming here and seein that kinda work bein put in is what inspires me.
Dank looks like ur piece is torn between having bends and being round
Ribcage im diggin those simples nice and clean
the fill in the chris piece is real nice. keep it up.
@ sinn nice flicks man first one is dopee
fruit- if ur gonna do somethin on a curve like that give the letters some motion but work on structure more
sin- keep it up showin alota potential
amen- dig the style i like the m the a is alittle too big tho draws off the focal point
Look alright to paint??
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