mn nice- dont flare the bars so much and bring those letters together. and that U is retarded.
Ewal- thats gettin there. work on the E, its pretty weird. but if you fattened teh W a lil and lost the extension and made the horizontal bar on the L not a bubble it would look pretty dope.
Knoxin- practice those M and N's you got, and it could turn to something good. but you gotta start over on that E.
bored on an airplane... aha, hit me with usefull crits