mn nice- dont flare the bars so much and bring those letters together. and that U is retarded.
Ewal- thats gettin there. work on the E, its pretty weird. but if you fattened teh W a lil and lost the extension and made the horizontal bar on the L not a bubble it would look pretty dope.
Knoxin- practice those M and N's you got, and it could turn to something good. but you gotta start over on that E.
bored on an airplane... aha, hit me with usefull crits
Originally Posted by Mildstyles
a woman of the police sucked my cock!
But damn Dankbudz i like your letters, clean and simple.
diggin the last one.
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hell yeah, that last one is dope
Shitty pic.
fixed up but unfinished
aight Ster like it, the last one is dopest
What do you guys think?
crits?
Peter - like it more than the one before, lines can much cleaner and the handies are bad, but overall it looks good. Nice colours is it only paint or also markers or something
Bottom page bump.
Shitty pic.
indeed the hadies are super bad... I was getting super lazy. I can paint over it and do it again. It's spray paint on canvas and the details are paint marker. My other one was brush with some pasty ass acrylic. I have a few others I am working on I'll post up soon. Thanks. As for you piece I like the direction you're going. I would drop the arrow on the bottom of the T and the way this flows I might make the o, r, e in a cursive fashion. The direction of the E looks promising to me but the execution needs some work keep working on it. It creates a big gap where the BS is. This is a close up of a really bad attempt to conveigh what I had in mind. I should have tilted the O and R to give it a little more cursive feel among otherthings. Keep it up.
@Beast> not a bad start. You're missing 3d on the top of the S, in the hole of the A, and the top of the K. Your 3d seems to change directions a bit too. Put a dot somewhere and use a ruler if you have to. Take your time with it and attention to detail. Keep it up.
Before and After
lol no comment or crits?
Shitty shit shit. I suck at graff again!
Been a long time since I've sketched or even looked in these threads.
Fuck You
cover bommb
hit up in my mini book
all crooked, and scrappy
corner of a pagge
exchange i did for the homie aokay
My D is hella ugly here,
these are all pretty old, camera broke, so no knew flicks(
DIFR11
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@KEHM keep it simple for now. letters are jumbled and hard to make out at all with a bunch of extra nonsense that doesn't help.
Last edited by PETER; 08-24-2011 at 11:08 AM.
old bs battle not sure if it polled
i paint go simpler dont do bends or lean
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