i like everything but the r bro
Mase I love the flow of that piece, although I feel like the N should be fatter to match the other letters!
if it's snag, the a looks a lot like an s.
it looks ok, but the N's structure doesnt match the rest of the the piece and looks kinda wierd, also the G flares weird around the middle part too
Keep the S and G, completely scrap the rest.
feelin that reach straight
thanks, im workin on another now, I fucked up the outline on the H on that 1 up there
...seems like I fuck up a letter everytime
Last edited by ribcage; 09-04-2011 at 07:00 PM.
rib - im not feelin the E on the top one, but everything else looks good
SOL - i think it would look a lot better without those things under all the letters
i was bored at work today so i started sketching, it turned up a big pice of shit!
MASE- cool flow, letters all nice, you should only worke the N a little more
I like that Jiska, but I see why you might not like it. Nice choice of colors though! And Ewal your probably right I was fuckin around haha but I LOVE that W and that A but the E and L just dont match the flow of the W and A. Work on that and it'll be fresh!
yeah, Im not diggin that E either, like I said, I seem to fuck up a letter every time... Just tryin out variations and what not before I paint the same thing again... cheers tho
@jiska yo seems like you toned down the add ons to just a few extensions, startin to look a lot better! The S should be structured more as an S, right now the top 2 bars are scrunched, and it looks weird, would look waaay better with a more "regular" styled S... only other thing is the L is burried under your A, which poses as a problem visually. The highlights really make that peice tho, I dig em
@Ewal ytour on the right track with the W and A, but the E needs some major rethinking, and the L lacks style compared to the rest. But the L isnt bad, whats bad is the bottom half of the E, its quite unproportionate to the rest...
...thats all for now, hope it may help
never painted a day in my life, never spray painted, never done a canvas, never done water colors, never painted on bitches, never even fuckin finger painted
Seen the smoke coming out the O on a sketch in the euro thread thought it was koool so yeah.. haha
First post on here Just a quick thing I did.
Hit the spot and don't get caught.