Blackbooks

[Jiska Matos]

i was bored at work today so i started sketching, it turned up a big pice of shit!

MASE- cool flow, letters all nice, you should only worke the N a little more

[Shit Outta Luck]

I like that Jiska, but I see why you might not like it. Nice choice of colors though! And Ewal your probably right I was fuckin around haha but I LOVE that W and that A but the E and L just dont match the flow of the W and A. Work on that and it'll be fresh!

[TastyMcNasty]

thanks, im workin on another now, I fucked up the outline on the H on that 1 up there

...seems like I fuck up a letter everytime

thats dope, only thing im not digging is the E

[ribcage]

yeah, Im not diggin that E either, like I said, I seem to fuck up a letter every time... Just tryin out variations and what not before I paint the same thing again... cheers tho

@jiska yo seems like you toned down the add ons to just a few extensions, startin to look a lot better! The S should be structured more as an S, right now the top 2 bars are scrunched, and it looks weird, would look waaay better with a more "regular" styled S... only other thing is the L is burried under your A, which poses as a problem visually. The highlights really make that peice tho, I dig em

@Ewal ytour on the right track with the W and A, but the E needs some major rethinking, and the L lacks style compared to the rest. But the L isnt bad, whats bad is the bottom half of the E, its quite unproportionate to the rest...

...thats all for now, hope it may help

[MASE P_2s]

rib do you paint? no disrespect im just wondering

[ribcage]

never painted a day in my life, never spray painted, never done a canvas, never done water colors, never painted on bitches, never even fuckin finger painted

[pointman]

Seen the smoke coming out the O on a sketch in the euro thread thought it was koool so yeah.. haha

[Eiko]

First post on here Just a quick thing I did.

[Pitlord]

So, my first post on here. I ve got 3 Pics out of my Blackbook. Criticism is welcome

Skull - dDos

Chess - dDos

Character


On Canvas



dDos is my Tag. Cheers

[DARE 2 B Different]

That was all done on my book in boring Sociology lessons.

[sema]

[sadgeh]

The question is simple, any crits?

[Shit Outta Luck]

Fuck Da Police lol


Some shit I did in Physics


Quick pen freestyle filled in at home

[sema]

sorry bro but that last fill....

[Shit Outta Luck]

lol I was fucking around

[smack1one]

did this at school...any crits?


crits?

[Mischuf]

Pen smudged, too much negative space in 'M', i don't normally use vanishing point 3d and i never use a ruler for it (i'm not gonna practice with a crutch). No idea of colours yet...

[sema]

sol-haha i woulda posted that dude either way i forgot about it on my photo bucket n when i seen it i had to use it i used to impliment it to many sketchs on here years back, i dig the orange n green one in the first sketch tho
mischuf-that looks like somethin my kid woulda made with legos go to block letters like the simplest a letter can be like my kids lego sculptures you need a foundation to build from
spek- you got the right idea just try to use consistant bars to make your letters like in the p how the bar inside the loop doesnt line up with the bar under it(in the second one scrap most of the first) your s needs alot of work too try not to wory about givin the letters motion yet. i could go on further but i gotta get up early so ill leave it at that

[LiveFreeDieFree]

Shits mad weak I know, but I forreal need some crits. It's a hall pass from school, btw. Needed some extra credit....Also, the camera quality is shitty. My bad..

[Mischuf]

i did dude. Started with blocks and bars and developed along a theme... bent blocks with wedge serifs...



Although now that i look, i think i made that "I" up off the top of my head...