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    So, my first post on here. I ve got 3 Pics out of my Blackbook. Criticism is welcome

    Skull - dDos

    Chess - dDos

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    dDos is my Tag. Cheers

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    That was all done on my book in boring Sociology lessons.
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    The question is simple, any crits?
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    Fuck Da Police lol
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    Some shit I did in Physics
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    Quick pen freestyle filled in at home
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    sorry bro but that last fill....Name:  critic.jpg
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    lol I was fucking around

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    did this at school...any crits?

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    crits?
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    Pen smudged, too much negative space in 'M', i don't normally use vanishing point 3d and i never use a ruler for it (i'm not gonna practice with a crutch). No idea of colours yet...
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    Peace or Piece, its all the same to me...

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    sol-haha i woulda posted that dude either way i forgot about it on my photo bucket n when i seen it i had to use it i used to impliment it to many sketchs on here years back, i dig the orange n green one in the first sketch tho
    mischuf-that looks like somethin my kid woulda made with legos go to block letters like the simplest a letter can be like my kids lego sculptures you need a foundation to build from
    spek- you got the right idea just try to use consistant bars to make your letters like in the p how the bar inside the loop doesnt line up with the bar under it(in the second one scrap most of the first) your s needs alot of work too try not to wory about givin the letters motion yet. i could go on further but i gotta get up early so ill leave it at that

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    Shits mad weak I know, but I forreal need some crits. It's a hall pass from school, btw. Needed some extra credit....Also, the camera quality is shitty. My bad..

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    i did dude. Started with blocks and bars and developed along a theme... bent blocks with wedge serifs...

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    Although now that i look, i think i made that "I" up off the top of my head...
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    Nah man, when we say foundation and structure, think of that letter in real life trying to stand up on its own like a bridge. That shit would collapse in a second. Get what I'm sayin?

    Para un chica. Crit if you want. I'll finish it sometime this week.

    Last edited by MN Nice; 09-06-2011 at 08:45 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Nah man, when we say foundation and structure, think of that letter in real life trying to stand up on its own like a bridge. That shit would collapse in a second. Get what I'm sayin?
    Um... No... Not really... Cud you explain a bit more.
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    mischuf your not hearin me ur not ready to give letters bends twists hummers..Name:  critic.jpg
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mischuf View Post
    Um... No... Not really... Cud you explain a bit more.
    Stick to simples. I'll let you learn what I'm sayin in time on your own. I know its boring and blah blah blah, but gaining a style from simps = success in more advanced pieces.

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    so... spend more time doing this...
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    You got it, Sherlock. But you can add style to that. Add some extensions, serifs, whatever. Play around with your letters and find what you are good at.

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    ya see how that h still looks like shyt thats y you need more time on simples


 

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