The b scared the hell out of me when it suddenly appeared... I'd do it different next time. more like 2 little blocks sitting on each other... think i'm getting the hang of the vanishing point on the fly.
The b scared the hell out of me when it suddenly appeared... I'd do it different next time. more like 2 little blocks sitting on each other... think i'm getting the hang of the vanishing point on the fly.
Last edited by Mischuf; 09-10-2011 at 07:34 AM.
Peace or Piece, its all the same to me...
@seyr. is that in ur black book? lol for a second i thought it was on a wall.and like the other dude said the s is out of place. bring that top portion of it over to the right some more and it should look better.
@emace some of the letters look a little off (extension on the T in stakes) but over all i like it . but im biased i love de la soul
@deso do simpler letters for your throw and get rid of the negativ space in the e
@haste the letters are disproportional , the H is too tall the t's bars aren't even i'd just suggest stick to keyboard letters and ditch extensions and shit and stop trying to bend your bars
@mischuf. theres too many letters in that for me to comment on all of them, but those s's make me wanna hurl.
was fucking ripped in class the other day and did. this
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
damn it ur the 2nd person to say seyr, i was goin for sevr but bubble v's are a bitch...its on the work bench at my shop so i just layer down some tape and cut around the throw lol
maybe round it off at the bottom so it doesn't look like another bar. thats why i thought it was a y.
and i dont know why your doing your shit that way, but i'd suggest just go cop a blackbook from michaels/walmart and use that. or atleast looseleaf or osmething.
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
i have a book i was just at work and it was wicked slow so i had to compromise to make the time go by hahaha
i would raise the bottom half of your g, and maybe differ your E's more from eachother
VEMSONE
aaesoo - Looks fine to me
emace1 - Everything else is straight except the M, it looks off
Got bored at work and tried to mess with letter structure somewhat. First ones really bad but I figured I throw it in too.
Crits?
Yes I know I'm a toy and everyone else is better then me. Quit pointing it out.
it's not that the first one is bad, its that all of them are; work on your bar width before you try to get adventurous. you want to get used to doing simples with consistent bars so you can get a mastery of letters and you dont waste your time doing some wack shit that doesn't work.
It is impossible to keep a straight face in the presence of one or more kittens. ~Cynthia E. VarnadoOriginally Posted by ribcage
can i get some damn crits?
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
take your own advice, Idk how you can get on him telling him his shit is "bad" when your shit is just as bad...
@pez your shit is bad
@tasty your letters always look the sames... That last one is kinda cool, not too on point, that A has got potential tho
talk... yeah that bar on the H is fucked up,yeah some 3d is off, whatev
Last edited by ribcage; 09-10-2011 at 11:37 PM.
^sick bro! i like where that style is going!
and what do you think about your exchange? thats my favourite out of that post, in all honesty
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
I like the A, I like the B on the bombing science hand. Theres a ton of negative space. I suggest doubling the bar width on all your letters, it will make your letters look chunkier, and reduce negative space. You'll find it harder to do those extensions you always do, but it may make you think of new ones
Tasty - i agree with rib your stuff always looks the same. ur good enough to try some new things
Rib - those are so sick, the only thing i would change is that the R kinda looks like a B
thanks for the proper crits bro.
for that, here you go
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
thats all I get? Somebody isnt getting anymore crits...
Beach
A and C looks dope
lol its an ill B, and an ill R.
alright i'll give some crits hahah. your E and A are dope as hell, the top of the C seems awkward to me idk, and that H is kinda hurting i suggest making the extensions all pop off to one direction, rather than that one you have going towards the A.
all i got for now.
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Posting Permissions
Reply With Quote
Bookmarks