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    it's not that the first one is bad, its that all of them are; work on your bar width before you try to get adventurous. you want to get used to doing simples with consistent bars so you can get a mastery of letters and you dont waste your time doing some wack shit that doesn't work.
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    can i get some damn crits?
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    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
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    Quote Originally Posted by .Cuore View Post
    it's not that the first one is bad, its that all of them are; work on your bar width before you try to get adventurous. you want to get used to doing simples with consistent bars so you can get a mastery of letters and you dont waste your time doing some wack shit that doesn't work.
    take your own advice, Idk how you can get on him telling him his shit is "bad" when your shit is just as bad...

    @pez your shit is bad
    @tasty your letters always look the sames... That last one is kinda cool, not too on point, that A has got potential tho

    talk... yeah that bar on the H is fucked up,yeah some 3d is off, whatev

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    ^sick bro! i like where that style is going!
    and what do you think about your exchange? thats my favourite out of that post, in all honesty
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    I like the A, I like the B on the bombing science hand. Theres a ton of negative space. I suggest doubling the bar width on all your letters, it will make your letters look chunkier, and reduce negative space. You'll find it harder to do those extensions you always do, but it may make you think of new ones

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    Tasty - i agree with rib your stuff always looks the same. ur good enough to try some new things
    Rib - those are so sick, the only thing i would change is that the R kinda looks like a B

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    Quote Originally Posted by ribcage View Post
    I like the A, I like the B on the bombing science hand. Theres a ton of negative space. I suggest doubling the bar width on all your letters, it will make your letters look chunkier, and reduce negative space. You'll find it harder to do those extensions you always do, but it may make you think of new ones
    thanks for the proper crits bro.
    for that, here you go
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    thats all I get? Somebody isnt getting anymore crits...

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    Beach


    A and C looks dope
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    lol its an ill B, and an ill R.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ribcage View Post
    thats all I get? Somebody isnt getting anymore crits...
    alright i'll give some crits hahah. your E and A are dope as hell, the top of the C seems awkward to me idk, and that H is kinda hurting i suggest making the extensions all pop off to one direction, rather than that one you have going towards the A.
    all i got for now.
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    Diggin your stuff Soar. You're really getting a good handle on your style. Unlike me haha

    Sol, keep working on your letters. And theres too much of a kink in the bottom bar of your L, looks like it'd be for a W.

    crits please


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    @ribcage thanks i wasn't sure if it would go into either Blackbook or Throwies

    Would this fit more into the blackbooks?
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    Quote Originally Posted by ribcage View Post
    take your own advice, Idk how you can get on him telling him his shit is "bad" when your shit is just as bad...
    that's funny coming from someone whose handies look like a 5-year-old kid in special ed did them.
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    My handies look like that? LMAO!
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    I do like the style on your handies Reach. and Aeso two pages back, that sketch if fucking ill. Although the A has way too much negative space at the bottom of it, and the S just looks awkward. I think you should've made the middle of it come up more and changed the bottom a bit. And MN Nice I realize the L is fucked up haha, sometimes I can get it right, sometimes. I'm working on it dude, just gotta keep moving forward. Thanks though.

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    props on the second to last one and the first one. i'll give it to you, you're pretty good, but you don't need to talk shit and act like king of the forum 24/7 regardless.
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    I aint on here lookin for your approval, and I dont need/want your props. What you quoted at the top of this page was the truth, I wasnt trying to blatantly talk shit to you to just talk shit you. I said it because you went out of your way to talk shit to someone else without posting a pic when your just as bad. I dont want or think im "king of forum" if you think that, then thats your problem, and you shouldnt be trippin at all.

    Wheres all the hostility coming from? Wasnt I nice to you? Didnt I try to help you? Lol its funny that you tried to insult my hands before trying to insult me for being a post whore, you should know better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ribcage View Post
    I aint on here lookin for your approval, and I dont need/want your props. What you quoted at the top of this page was the truth, I wasnt trying to blatantly talk shit to you to just talk shit you. I said it because you went out of your way to talk shit to someone else without posting a pic when your just as bad. I dont want or think im "king of forum" if you think that, then thats your problem, and you shouldnt be trippin at all.

    Wheres all the hostility coming from? Wasnt I nice to you? Didnt I try to help you? Lol its funny that you tried to insult my hands before trying to insult me for being a post whore, you should know better.
    ^^this.
    and by the way your handies are tight bro.

    and shit outa luck, i garuntee everyone in this forum is getting tired of hearing this but go simple and drop the connections and extensions for now, at least until you get proper structure and flow in your work.
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