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    maybe round it off at the bottom so it doesn't look like another bar. thats why i thought it was a y.

    and i dont know why your doing your shit that way, but i'd suggest just go cop a blackbook from michaels/walmart and use that. or atleast looseleaf or osmething.
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    i have a book i was just at work and it was wicked slow so i had to compromise to make the time go by hahaha

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    IMG_0039 by sirduke!, on Flickr

    the extensions look dumb and the O is small,,,any other crits??

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    i would raise the bottom half of your g, and maybe differ your E's more from eachother
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    aaesoo - Looks fine to me
    emace1 - Everything else is straight except the M, it looks off
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    Got bored at work and tried to mess with letter structure somewhat. First ones really bad but I figured I throw it in too.
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    it's not that the first one is bad, its that all of them are; work on your bar width before you try to get adventurous. you want to get used to doing simples with consistent bars so you can get a mastery of letters and you dont waste your time doing some wack shit that doesn't work.
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    can i get some damn crits?
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    Quote Originally Posted by .Cuore View Post
    it's not that the first one is bad, its that all of them are; work on your bar width before you try to get adventurous. you want to get used to doing simples with consistent bars so you can get a mastery of letters and you dont waste your time doing some wack shit that doesn't work.
    take your own advice, Idk how you can get on him telling him his shit is "bad" when your shit is just as bad...

    @pez your shit is bad
    @tasty your letters always look the sames... That last one is kinda cool, not too on point, that A has got potential tho

    talk... yeah that bar on the H is fucked up,yeah some 3d is off, whatev

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    ^sick bro! i like where that style is going!
    and what do you think about your exchange? thats my favourite out of that post, in all honesty
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    I like the A, I like the B on the bombing science hand. Theres a ton of negative space. I suggest doubling the bar width on all your letters, it will make your letters look chunkier, and reduce negative space. You'll find it harder to do those extensions you always do, but it may make you think of new ones

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    Tasty - i agree with rib your stuff always looks the same. ur good enough to try some new things
    Rib - those are so sick, the only thing i would change is that the R kinda looks like a B

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    Quote Originally Posted by ribcage View Post
    I like the A, I like the B on the bombing science hand. Theres a ton of negative space. I suggest doubling the bar width on all your letters, it will make your letters look chunkier, and reduce negative space. You'll find it harder to do those extensions you always do, but it may make you think of new ones
    thanks for the proper crits bro.
    for that, here you go
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    thats all I get? Somebody isnt getting anymore crits...

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    A and C looks dope
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    lol its an ill B, and an ill R.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ribcage View Post
    thats all I get? Somebody isnt getting anymore crits...
    alright i'll give some crits hahah. your E and A are dope as hell, the top of the C seems awkward to me idk, and that H is kinda hurting i suggest making the extensions all pop off to one direction, rather than that one you have going towards the A.
    all i got for now.
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    Diggin your stuff Soar. You're really getting a good handle on your style. Unlike me haha

    Sol, keep working on your letters. And theres too much of a kink in the bottom bar of your L, looks like it'd be for a W.

    crits please


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    @ribcage thanks i wasn't sure if it would go into either Blackbook or Throwies

    Would this fit more into the blackbooks?
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    Quote Originally Posted by ribcage View Post
    take your own advice, Idk how you can get on him telling him his shit is "bad" when your shit is just as bad...
    that's funny coming from someone whose handies look like a 5-year-old kid in special ed did them.
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