Blackbooks

[PETER]

Your canvases are solid. I'll pm you some of mine later see if you wanna trade.

[vems]

aside from dropping the crazy huge chunk on the top of the K how might I improve these letters? Attachment 32769

i would honestly add some symmetry to that and take the top right arm of the K in the other direction to somewhat mirror the T. and the bottom right leg will mirror the bottom left of the A.

[MakeItTakeIt]

For drop shadow just imagine youre tracing the outline of your letters like a half inch to the left. Or right, or any direction that's up to you.

Antik, besides droppin that big ass tumor, I think it would help your K if you made the main back bar a bit more prominent.

crits, comments?

Ignore that hand lol

[PETER]

Thanks for the input Vems. I'll play with the K a bit.

[vems]

Thanks for the input Vems. I'll play with the K a bit.

np homie

[Spyder]

Any crits for my piece? I want to get better at this.

[dankbudz]

Thanks for the crits bra
Im diggin both of those but on that aply piece im not really feeling the ly connection or much of the y. The A and P has alot more movement and the Y is that rigid style you were doin before.
The broke piece is kinda the same, i like the BR but the leg of the R to the E looks too rigid for what you had first.

[EWL24]

rib - those are nice, i really like that P

reposting for crits

[ribcage]

Thanks for the crits bra
Im diggin both of those but on that aply piece im not really feeling the ly connection or much of the y. The A and P has alot more movement and the Y is that rigid style you were doin before.
The broke piece is kinda the same, i like the BR but the leg of the R to the E looks too rigid for what you had first.

The aply was a quick freestyle against mn nice, so the letters are kinda random, but yeah the P dont really fit the rest of the style.

On the broke peice the R and K are practically the same, but it adds balance imo, I just should have made a curvier E.

talk about balance... this the rough draft. gonna eat and go to work, prolly redo it tonight. no need to crit

[LIZARD]

trying something new but i think i gotta put the lower part of the s under the curve instead of in front...crits

ribs: i definitely like the idea but I'm not feelin the H

[Shroomsh]

sevr. doesnt reach do that e with his throws? and not really feeling the V kinda looks like a y, and for the drop shadow to make sense you need to fill in the hole in the r

[LIZARD]

maybe he does idk i thought it was just a generic e

[vems]

take the nub out of the bottom of the v

[Kostonee]

rib - those are nice, i really like that P

reposting for crits

I really like the bottom one bro, but maybe make the E a little more curvy like the W and L are... just my 2 pence

[-Sinn-]

Reach - I really dig the loopy piece other then the curves on the H not sure whats off lookin forward to seein next draft ill have ur exchnge piece up at the end of the week local writers borrowing my book broke simple is fire
Sevr- try and make it so theres no deadspace in your throw think fat stylish marshmellows
Ewal - feelin that first simple most
4am Insomnia Canvas I'll have a better pic tommorow

[PETER]

Any crits for my piece? I want to get better at this.

Every thing is good... except the letters. You are obviously a skilled artist, but your letters need work. For something like what you have there I think a clean script style would be more suitable. Keep working.

Rib: that P does stick out in the Aply piece. I think if you stiffen up that A like the L and Y and use a different fill color for the P and make it stand out even more it would work better. One of my favorites from you. And with the swirly one I agree that the loops on the H are a little strange. Maybe a lowercase h would suit better, just make the right leg come up kinda high.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

hey ribcage do me a kils. i dont have much to offer since i kinda suck, i dont wanna embarrass myself

[PETER]

thoughts?

[vems]

thoughts?

clean, raise the center hole in the a a bit, and possibly remove/choose a better color for the lines inside the letters, like a different/lighter shade of purple, or a bright solid white. other than that looking clean man. nice fade/blend

[PETER]

clean, raise the center hole in the a a bit, and possibly remove/choose a better color for the lines inside the letters, like a different/lighter shade of purple, or a bright solid white. other than that looking clean man. nice fade/blend

thanks man. should have kept them the same height. The lines inside are silver, doesn't really show... just working with what I got.