Any crits for my piece? I want to get better at this.
Thanks for the crits bra
Im diggin both of those but on that aply piece im not really feeling the ly connection or much of the y. The A and P has alot more movement and the Y is that rigid style you were doin before.
The broke piece is kinda the same, i like the BR but the leg of the R to the E looks too rigid for what you had first.
rib - those are nice, i really like that P
reposting for crits
On the broke peice the R and K are practically the same, but it adds balance imo, I just should have made a curvier E.
talk about balance... this the rough draft. gonna eat and go to work, prolly redo it tonight. no need to crit
Last edited by ribcage; 09-21-2011 at 06:27 PM.
trying something new but i think i gotta put the lower part of the s under the curve instead of in front...crits
ribs: i definitely like the idea but I'm not feelin the H
sevr. doesnt reach do that e with his throws? and not really feeling the V kinda looks like a y, and for the drop shadow to make sense you need to fill in the hole in the r
maybe he does idk i thought it was just a generic e
take the nub out of the bottom of the v
Reach - I really dig the loopy piece other then the curves on the H not sure whats off lookin forward to seein next draft ill have ur exchnge piece up at the end of the week local writers borrowing my book broke simple is fire
Sevr- try and make it so theres no deadspace in your throw think fat stylish marshmellows
Ewal - feelin that first simple most
4am Insomnia Canvas I'll have a better pic tommorow
Rib: that P does stick out in the Aply piece. I think if you stiffen up that A like the L and Y and use a different fill color for the P and make it stand out even more it would work better. One of my favorites from you. And with the swirly one I agree that the loops on the H are a little strange. Maybe a lowercase h would suit better, just make the right leg come up kinda high.
Here is some new shit.
can you like do some "fuck Phat2" tags on every one of these exchanges and battles you're planning on doing dude? that'd be cool thanks
for the ones for this site, that can be arranged. Im afraid Id get a lot of shit if homies I know knew I was on this site tho