random stuff... @Killroy looking fresh
dude you suck at epic levels... your purple thing you posted here looks like something i would spit after drinking black vodka!Originally Posted by Saiko
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@jiska yeah, i do that's why i'm here.
tht arrow is there to kill the dead space i think it looks a lil empty without it
you need to go back to the basic of the basics and do complete sketches, not some fast shit you do in 3 to 5m, they don't need to be perfect in colouring or lines, but try making it look like you care about what you r doing
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@jiska yeah, i do that's why i'm here.
it does look empty, try working the M to fill that gap
That actually took me a little while i sketched it once and the pen fucked up the lines, so i did it again took like 9 minutes cus i kept spazing about my lines and letters. it looks under done cus i'm out of markers to fill/outline/effect/etc.
I get what your saying, though,
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Last edited by Saiko; 09-22-2011 at 09:36 PM.
Some sketches I did in class/at work.
make the t thin at the bottom cuz its the same as ur I and bring the m and k out from hiding lolThat actually took me a little while i sketched it once and the pen fucked up the lines, so i did it again took like 9 minutes cus i kept spazing about my lines and letters. it looks under done cus i'm out of markers to fill/outline/effect/etc.
I get what your saying, though,
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the T breaks up the A an makes it look like an H. too.
Live free: work on where to bend your letters and connections.... Not a fan of wobbly looking letters... make them stand up strong. They look like they are feeble and going to fall over. The FBSK is your best and the connections aren't working all that well.
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I get what your saying, though,
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I was waiting for that.
so im working on this throwback sek peice(was my old word i got arrested writing) and i went to re-outline a throwie i did not realizing it was ontop on this page and it bled through right where i wanted to do a vems peice above it, jus wondering what i shuld do to save it.(note: i still need to add the K where most the marks are, i figure once its all filled in it shuld look fine.) another question i have is, what do u guys think i shuld do for a fill? something crazy, or a simple 2/3 color fill...any advice is much apreciated. also ive been really trying to work on my bar consistancy, most of the effects are inside the actual letter.
Last edited by vems; 09-23-2011 at 01:21 PM.
VEMSONE
the letters are dramatic enough I would use a simple fill. shadding and blending at most. I suggest making the bottom of the S a mirror of the bottom of the E. Just a thought.
yeah, i was thinking the same, like having a little lip going outward like the E?
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that and more so the angle with height coming back up. If I where to take your style here and make it mine. I would base the S almost entirely on that E.... or atleast the bottom half of it, from the middle bar down. It would keep the piece moving in one direction.
alright, ill hafta give it a go on the next one, im flat out of erasers HAH, but im going to try and base the K off the e aswell
VEMSONE
as long as douchebag saiko dont bite, its all good. Atomik aint up as much anymore
but we all know saiko sucks fat ones, and will never even be able to measure up to the real atomiks worst shit
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We're from totally different places, have different styles. and i'm not even near his/her level.
^bro you blow. shouldnt be writin atomik homie this is graffiti dude you gotta respect the old cats
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