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    Thanks for the tips guys I'll try to work on it...

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    yo peter, i got crit. i think it woulda looked better with the E and V lowered closer to the base and extend the left bar of the V like the right and remove the top left funky extension on the R. also make sure you go through curves in one motion like on that right S part, where you it stops in the middle and continues.

    fuck im too lazy to crit anyone else..
    for the tourney, pretty lame letters and shit, shoulda fixed up a quite a few places..
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    not bad, bar on top of A is too small on the right side. IMO you shoulda Crossed the J with a bar that went over the top of A... but it looks aight how it is

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    Thanks guys

    @Dank: I have an outlline I did for Dank clothing years ago somewhere. I'll try and remember to flick it for you.

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    Hey guys whoever crited that if i change my name to a k instead of a C thank you so much... I'm doing it today in spanish class I was bored so i worked out the letters and practiced alot with bars and I'll post up with I came up with after my baseball practice so you guys can crit it and I can work on it more but whoever said try a K i love you haha.

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    Spyder: That second one isn't all bad. The S needs work, but you've got something going with the P, Y, and D. Keep at it.

    Akro: You're welcome.

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    Longtime viewer but this is my first post. Good work in this thread.Name:  bbcover.jpg
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    Thanks for the advice but ill continue to post here. A freestyle canvas I did the other day with one 4 alls.Name:  canvaszero.jpg
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    First draft for the turney. PARY
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    Peter- word brotha, if u got the time thatd be dope

    thought id edit this is, quickie character bomb idea


    Yo Nips! Fix that A, its not lookin too good.
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    ^^
    thats tight, ur chars are always awesome

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    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Spyder: That second one isn't all bad. The S needs work, but you've got something going with the P, Y, and D. Keep at it.
    Thanks. Those were the only 3 letters I liked too. Lol. I'm going to mess with it again another time. I made a sticker with the untwisted SPYDER version to put inside of my new blackbook. Crits?


    My first official piece in my blackbook is going to be a Spiderman drawing that I may or may not turn into a tattoo design.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    Peter- word brotha, if u got the time thatd be dope

    thought id edit this is, quickie character bomb idea


    Yo Nips! Fix that A, its not lookin too good.
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    heres a quickie i just did, crits are welcome
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    Yo u got the structure down for those letters, try something else with it before you chqnge up where the letters are around the baseline. Give the letters some funk yo

    Spydr- im diggin it, but ur missin some 3d on the P ane R
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    SPYDER - Make those bars thicker!
    ZERS - I'd say all those pieces are pretty slick except the 'decay' and 'vader' ones. I think they both lack structure compared to your other work.
    TEMPO - you've come along way man I remember you posting the shittest simps lol! that ones nice, just make the middle bar of that E a bit longer so it fits better.
    EWAL - Keep practising that style, when it's looking tidy as fuck you'll be able to begin manipulating the bars into different shapes and styles.

    Reads 'SKOPE' done in biro. It feels like its missing something. So crit away and whatever.Name:  WP_000376.jpg
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    Didn't realise how blurry it looks. Try and imagine it all looking a bit crisper.
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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    Spydr- im diggin it, but ur missin some 3d on the P ane R
    Thanks for that. U just added it on the sticker and will add the color when I get home.
    -Skope thanks for the tip. I'll make my next writing have fatter bars. Working on a spiderman pic for now though. The pic you did is tiiiiiight.
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    Did this 3 days ago..... Couldn't think of wat to write so i just did the battle word... Not entering the battle cuz I'm still learning a lot and I'm not very good.... Crits please?

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    Thanks skope. The vader one is just a doodle I did with a brush pen I shouldn't have posted it and the decay one I rushed through after fucking up the characters face after coloring so I didn't sketch anything out I just colored it. Don't really care for it either haha. Your piece is sick even without color.
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    HEX (done for a friend) hes even more toy than me. this was a quick sketch i did in like 10 minutes

    oh and the E is toy as balls.


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