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    Fokes- that first one isnt your best but your other pieces are real dope
    Tempo- im not really feelin that oval for the dot over the I
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    tempo, nice simps but the only thing that bugs me is the little bar thing at the bottom of the "L" and idk if its just me but it seems out of place because it doesn't show up anywhere else in the piece

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    tempo- bring the middle bar on your E out some more. that and keep bars the same thickness or vary them less atleast.
    mook- it's good i just don't like the random little things comin off the M and K.
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    Thanks for the tips guys I'll try to work on it...

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    yo peter, i got crit. i think it woulda looked better with the E and V lowered closer to the base and extend the left bar of the V like the right and remove the top left funky extension on the R. also make sure you go through curves in one motion like on that right S part, where you it stops in the middle and continues.

    fuck im too lazy to crit anyone else..
    for the tourney, pretty lame letters and shit, shoulda fixed up a quite a few places..
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    not bad, bar on top of A is too small on the right side. IMO you shoulda Crossed the J with a bar that went over the top of A... but it looks aight how it is

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    Thanks guys

    @Dank: I have an outlline I did for Dank clothing years ago somewhere. I'll try and remember to flick it for you.

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    Hey guys whoever crited that if i change my name to a k instead of a C thank you so much... I'm doing it today in spanish class I was bored so i worked out the letters and practiced alot with bars and I'll post up with I came up with after my baseball practice so you guys can crit it and I can work on it more but whoever said try a K i love you haha.

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    Spyder: That second one isn't all bad. The S needs work, but you've got something going with the P, Y, and D. Keep at it.

    Akro: You're welcome.

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    Longtime viewer but this is my first post. Good work in this thread.Name:  bbcover.jpg
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    Thanks for the advice but ill continue to post here. A freestyle canvas I did the other day with one 4 alls.Name:  canvaszero.jpg
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    First draft for the turney. PARY
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    Peter- word brotha, if u got the time thatd be dope

    thought id edit this is, quickie character bomb idea


    Yo Nips! Fix that A, its not lookin too good.
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    ^^
    thats tight, ur chars are always awesome

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    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Spyder: That second one isn't all bad. The S needs work, but you've got something going with the P, Y, and D. Keep at it.
    Thanks. Those were the only 3 letters I liked too. Lol. I'm going to mess with it again another time. I made a sticker with the untwisted SPYDER version to put inside of my new blackbook. Crits?


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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    Peter- word brotha, if u got the time thatd be dope

    thought id edit this is, quickie character bomb idea


    Yo Nips! Fix that A, its not lookin too good.
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    heres a quickie i just did, crits are welcome
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    Yo u got the structure down for those letters, try something else with it before you chqnge up where the letters are around the baseline. Give the letters some funk yo

    Spydr- im diggin it, but ur missin some 3d on the P ane R
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    SPYDER - Make those bars thicker!
    ZERS - I'd say all those pieces are pretty slick except the 'decay' and 'vader' ones. I think they both lack structure compared to your other work.
    TEMPO - you've come along way man I remember you posting the shittest simps lol! that ones nice, just make the middle bar of that E a bit longer so it fits better.
    EWAL - Keep practising that style, when it's looking tidy as fuck you'll be able to begin manipulating the bars into different shapes and styles.

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    Didn't realise how blurry it looks. Try and imagine it all looking a bit crisper.
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