Blackbooks

[Pitlord]

Sevr: I like the S a lot. Nice work

Shush: There is the outline of the second S hanging all over the rocks. I d overpaint that with grey. Imo looks besser. Cheers.

[shush4]

Sevr: I like the S a lot. Nice work

Shush: There is the outline of the second S hanging all over the rocks. I d overpaint that with grey. Imo looks besser. Cheers.

thats the 3d is a little funky on the 2nd s and i wanted it to be behind the cracked wall but i didnt inted on drawing the wall there at first when i inked my outline thats kinda whats going on there. the prismas wouldnt cover it.

[porkyPig]

[porkyPig]

[Tempo718]

wadup guys

[MyNipsAreHard]

Fokes- that first one isnt your best but your other pieces are real dope
Tempo- im not really feelin that oval for the dot over the I

MOOK LIFE^^^^
Crits please

[souloner]

tempo, nice simps but the only thing that bugs me is the little bar thing at the bottom of the "L" and idk if its just me but it seems out of place because it doesn't show up anywhere else in the piece

[aaesoo]

tempo- bring the middle bar on your E out some more. that and keep bars the same thickness or vary them less atleast.
mook- it's good i just don't like the random little things comin off the M and K.

[Im Acro]

Thanks for the tips guys I'll try to work on it...

[dankbudz]

yo peter, i got crit. i think it woulda looked better with the E and V lowered closer to the base and extend the left bar of the V like the right and remove the top left funky extension on the R. also make sure you go through curves in one motion like on that right S part, where you it stops in the middle and continues.

fuck im too lazy to crit anyone else..
for the tourney, pretty lame letters and shit, shoulda fixed up a quite a few places..

[ribcage]

not bad, bar on top of A is too small on the right side. IMO you shoulda Crossed the J with a bar that went over the top of A... but it looks aight how it is

[PETER]

Thanks guys

@Dank: I have an outlline I did for Dank clothing years ago somewhere. I'll try and remember to flick it for you.

[Im Acro]

Hey guys whoever crited that if i change my name to a k instead of a C thank you so much... I'm doing it today in spanish class I was bored so i worked out the letters and practiced alot with bars and I'll post up with I came up with after my baseball practice so you guys can crit it and I can work on it more but whoever said try a K i love you haha.

[PETER]

Spyder: That second one isn't all bad. The S needs work, but you've got something going with the P, Y, and D. Keep at it.

Akro: You're welcome.

[zero515]

Longtime viewer but this is my first post. Good work in this thread.

Vader doodleDecay the dauther of DeathZero zombies

Thanks for the advice but ill continue to post here. A freestyle canvas I did the other day with one 4 alls.

[MyNipsAreHard]

First draft for the turney. PARY

[dankbudz]

Peter- word brotha, if u got the time thatd be dope

thought id edit this is, quickie character bomb idea


Yo Nips! Fix that A, its not lookin too good.

[EWL24]

^^
thats tight, ur chars are always awesome

[Spyder]

Spyder: That second one isn't all bad. The S needs work, but you've got something going with the P, Y, and D. Keep at it.

Thanks. Those were the only 3 letters I liked too. Lol. I'm going to mess with it again another time. I made a sticker with the untwisted SPYDER version to put inside of my new blackbook. Crits?


My first official piece in my blackbook is going to be a Spiderman drawing that I may or may not turn into a tattoo design.

[TastyMcNasty]

Peter- word brotha, if u got the time thatd be dope

thought id edit this is, quickie character bomb idea


Yo Nips! Fix that A, its not lookin too good.

sick