Blackbooks

[Strange Journeys]

yo that gang is terrible, you were doing good progress for a while, now you fell off the wagon

[knowtheledge]

sketchin on the bus



added some flavor back at the lab

[Mr.Hater_666]

know- likin them colors

[knowtheledge]

thanks brotha n i was rockin snap backs before alll these children were too haha

[NouveauP]

Pretty good knowledge. The colors are dope. I wouldn't worry about those top splashes, I'd just keep the solid letter structure.
Simple during class.

[thotz.one]

something im working on.

[MyNipsAreHard]

knowledge- loving the wutang tribute. haha.
tempo- do simple shit

[thotz.one]

throwie i came up with yesterday.

[Tempo718]

Thanks for that input journey. If I can get some thots thanks

[MyNipsAreHard]

thotz- dont do the 3D or shadow over the other letters
tempo- forget the arrows

this took me FOREVER. its not even a full page. ahah

[Jiska Matos]

almost over.


know-nice one, sketchin on the bus rules

[EWL24]

bump for crits

[knowtheledge]

Jiska - thanks dude your style is mad nice. i aint a fan of anime but your characters are on point still. keep that ish coming!

Ewl - clean bars for sure dude, the bottom lines a good start for letter structure n flow. I would try to fill in some gaps tho

this is supposed to be for the sketch battle but i aint really fuckin with it..

[Jiska Matos]

EWL24- allways clean and true 2 your style, keep it up
Colors- First one has some cool things and it's not bad, got to work that "E", the second one is just wrong, the bad color scheme makes it worst...try making it more clean
Know- the orange outline just kills it, simple but stylish

[ERAYS]

knowtheledge --> thats siiick, i love the colors!!

EWL24 --> thats pretty good structure, i would try 2 mess with it now, like start throwing 3d on it and overlapping letters etc...

Jiska Matos --> thats really cool!!

any crits on this??

[Goofy_Wan]

Knowtheledge - Pretty beast man, I'd say that's heading into the realms of intermediate.

ERAYS - Nice, clean and fairly simple, also shows you're moving into making it a little more technical, but without trying too much too quickly. Nice one.

My reviewed 'Goof' piece:



I reckon its time I started getting colour on the go, which will have to wait for payday. An alphabet is next on the cards.

[Tempo718]

goofy - try an out line nex 1
erays - work in progress i hope, otherwise that is mad half ass. go over the pencil with something more permenant. maybe take out those lines that cross between letters
colors - characters are straight could you bug em out a lil more though. give em some vices or somethin ahha
jiska - good one that is clean homie
know - somethin about your work is confusing me im still trying to figure it out what it is tho.

[thotz.one]

work in progress

[skinaone]

i have no clue how to make peices so i cant really crit anybodys
but heres an exchange for my n i g g a ribcage

[Kasc-One]

redid this kline

heres one for speak