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    that natasha tag is dope
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    Personally i think your focused too much on the fill and less on letter structure. The fill is dop as balls but it seems a bit excessive especially since the letters are only so-so

    Bringing back one of my old styles. Crits?

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    just finished. any help? spells MECOR

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    ZETA, the bottom of the E and the left bar of the A look especially whack. Just sayin you should mess with em some more

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    Zeta- the T could use some more definition. the Ecovers to much of it.
    Hexx-dont see the E or C. getting better though. keep working on the letter structure. keep it simple bro
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    Hex - i think u should stick to block letters for now
    Zeta - the two pieces on the previous page look pretty cool, but, no hate, this just looks bad
    Block - looks good, but i would make the bottom of the C the same as the top

    line from the movie Fast Times at Ridgemont High crits please
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    Dope movie, but the character in the O and the piece as a whole is kind of plain, you should try and give it a little bit more personality and flow




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    Quote Originally Posted by Pitlord View Post
    Black Book

    1st try 3D


    Painted (without the "S")
    Quote Originally Posted by hexx View Post
    pit, i like thoes alot dude especailly the paint major props for getting that character up looks good. im sure you mean it to be that way, but i feel like you should fix it's eyes so it looks more impressive. great work though.
    I really feel the eyes are the best part of the raccoon

    My self-crit:

    I d fix the proportions and the ear. It wasnt quite as accurate, as it should have been.

    Cheers

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pitlord View Post
    I really feel the eyes are the best part of the raccoon

    My self-crit:

    I d fix the proportions and the ear. It wasnt quite as accurate, as it should have been.

    Cheers
    For a first 3d number and character that's a pretty damn good effort, especially with the paint job. Played man.

    This was my first ever sketch, before I went for Goofy. Way too wild-style to start, says 'Astra'

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    astro man, shits flying every were you should try to slow down and take control; simpler
    hexx ya man like it was mentioned before your e c as like fused into one try and give them bit more room
    nips your o could of used a bit more turn so it dint have that sharp turn thing going on

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    crits would be nice

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    shit i just finished
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    ZETA that highlighter one its grimey!

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    peace89, you're on the right path. keep at it.
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    Peace89 The big toothed fuckers are sick as hell. I'd like to see one with some color... maybe munching on some human flesh.

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    work in progress

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    peace89 - those are so sick, i think u should change the girls face to one of those big toothed guys though cause then it would be funny as fuck

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    Jiska- Hott stuff man
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    yo that gang is terrible, you were doing good progress for a while, now you fell off the wagon


 

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