(went back a few pages before all the bullshit)
Thotz- that DRZ piece is way over complicated, if i hadn't read the other posts and the hand i couldn't have known what it said.. i think you had a good idea but didn't really pull it off. try and tine down the extensions and shit. the straight you did is pretty cool though. i like that. and the straight letter on this page is cool aswell
Crook- i really don't like the O's... also, take a bit of time when you add ink cause a lot of your lines are really shaky. just try and do each line in a clean, smooth motion. even if it's a straight letter or simple piece, if it's clean and sharp, it will look a lot better. also, K's and R's are great letters to work off of each other, doesn't matter what's in between them. those two letters can make a piece work well. don't exactly mirror them or anything but just bare in mind that the basic structure for them is roughly the same...
Naked- with the orange piece, the letters are actually really good. the character, not so much. letters work though. good work. also that black and yellow simps is cool. work with that. not too keen on the purple piece though.
also, Jean, i don't think you painted that..
massive apologies for all the talk and no flicks, i'm at work