crits please
changed the E and colored it in
this last one i dont really know what to do with and i hate the L, but i cant think of a L that would fit with this
crits please
changed the E and colored it in
this last one i dont really know what to do with and i hate the L, but i cant think of a L that would fit with this
Ewal, fix your "e" in the last pic, and instead ofthe end of your "a" goin towards your "e", use your "L" instead.
I Was Rockin Snap Backs Before Mac Miller Did.
Ewal i like that first one. sure it's not mad fucking crazy and shit but it's smooth and pretty clean. if you can tweak it in a few areas, get some cans and start blasting that shit everywhere.
Broken Bones - TBSK MPDS DIGISIN 4298
(went back a few pages before all the bullshit)
Thotz- that DRZ piece is way over complicated, if i hadn't read the other posts and the hand i couldn't have known what it said.. i think you had a good idea but didn't really pull it off. try and tine down the extensions and shit. the straight you did is pretty cool though. i like that. and the straight letter on this page is cool aswell
Crook- i really don't like the O's... also, take a bit of time when you add ink cause a lot of your lines are really shaky. just try and do each line in a clean, smooth motion. even if it's a straight letter or simple piece, if it's clean and sharp, it will look a lot better. also, K's and R's are great letters to work off of each other, doesn't matter what's in between them. those two letters can make a piece work well. don't exactly mirror them or anything but just bare in mind that the basic structure for them is roughly the same...
Naked- with the orange piece, the letters are actually really good. the character, not so much. letters work though. good work. also that black and yellow simps is cool. work with that. not too keen on the purple piece though.
also, Jean, i don't think you painted that..
massive apologies for all the talk and no flicks, i'm at work
Last edited by TBS; 10-18-2011 at 10:13 PM.
Broken Bones - TBSK MPDS DIGISIN 4298
back of my big ass sketch pad for Art class.
Last edited by Phat 2; 10-19-2011 at 12:16 PM.
Yo wassup, this is my first attempt at a 'piece.' I've mainly just been drawing and hitting throwies/tags. It says Phishy, I kinda royally screwed up the P, last H and Y, but I still think that I have progressed. Please give me some input/opinions, thanks.
tophaa: please read the entire "New to Graffiti? Start here" thread please. It will address everything everyone would tell you.
Nips: Thanks a lot. Of course I only see the flaws in it, but I like the idea for it. I get a decent one every once in a while.
Last edited by PETER; 10-19-2011 at 07:10 AM.
ow my eyes. need to go more simpler tophaa. get the handle on straight letters first.
crits? i fucked up the 3d and dont really do colour schemes that often.
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
thotz, you dont say "more simpler"
be more simplistic. hows that mr moderator of english terms? lol.
dont make fun of his speech impediment, hes got dicks in his mouth
VVVVVVV Ha, you frontin, youve never touched a clit in your life
Last edited by ribcage; 10-19-2011 at 01:48 PM.
no ur moms clit got stuck in between my teeth for a second.
ive touched more clits then youve seen at home jerkin off to black midget porn.
Last edited by thotz.one; 10-19-2011 at 03:18 PM.
holy fuck can we all agree to just ignore thotz and not respond to him or something? seriously all the dude does is cause spam and post wack shit. if nobody replied to his posts he'd probably shut the fuck up.
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
lol spam. more like bombing! i will never shut the fuck up. especially since everybody is hatin on my shit for no reason haha. makes me want to post more.
Last edited by thotz.one; 10-20-2011 at 12:49 AM.
dam g thotz i respect your will to be yourself an all that but homie your intense so how come you have difficulty focusing that intensity into your art or letters or wateva the fuk it is u do. dont waste that energy on pointless endevors put it into your letters so maybe one day people will respect your work. yamean any1 who read this an agree wit me in the same spot as me just wanting to be what others have created success with.
I smoke Vega
i dont have a problem putting it into my letters and art. i do graff for me. you should too.
Last edited by thotz.one; 10-19-2011 at 04:00 PM.
of course g we all do it for us. but it seems to me your focusing your intensity in all the wrong places you dont agree?
I smoke Vega
all these lames are fuckin wit me. im not gonna back down and shut up cuz everybody got a problem with me for postin my stuff.
some old stuff.
Last edited by thotz.one; 10-19-2011 at 04:08 PM.
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