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lemme get some crits on the DERS
S is still fucked
Last edited by dankbudz; 10-27-2011 at 02:23 AM.
Originally Posted by Mildstyles
why is no one on...
like ive all ways sed smooth clean bars, good width n heights any letters you despise?
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you could define d bit better, give it more angle on the right ba. and the first vertical bar is not straight. you could also put r closer and over e, cuz thers no gap beetwin other letters. actually the top bar of s is bit too thick, thers nothing fucked about it.
i realize the vertical bar on the D isnt straight, thats what i meant to do, lol. i feel like it woulda looked too plain with a straight bar.
yeah i noticed that R as soon as i posted that shit up, was too lazy to move it and the S over.
and yea, i fixed the S, first one was maaad wobly and not a good curve.
Last edited by dankbudz; 10-27-2011 at 04:34 AM.
Temp, i'd add the yellow highlight to the middle bottom of the K leg just like you did with the N and make the stitch on the left leg of the N connect instead of being two separate small stitches
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Tempos shit looks like a 2 year old scribbled on a piece of paper...
Shell- fix your D, that whole thing is mad sketchy
Don't like the S or the E very much o.O
im guessing youre talking about the 3d
one more for the books...
ruzr piece..aint feelin the r's much crits?
looks a lot like RAZR, close the r off
shell keep at it your on the right path starting simple as it gets make your lines cleaner use a pencil so you can have 1 defined line rather than a bunch of lines.
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Not really feeling this piece, testing out these prismas I just got. I might need to do even more simples. Yes I know my W is fucked beyond belief.
take ur own crits, and these ones too. Start with teh S, gotta maintain the bar width bro, look how inconsistant it is on the curves, one of the main reasons it looks terrible. Then the K u gotta look at the same thing, like at the top of the left bar. Also, you gotta think of the 2 other bars of K as 1, you made a major fundamental error. THATS WHY WE DO SIMPLES. Bar width is off in spots on all the other letters too. The extended bar bottom of E is bad, and u already said adressed the W. The T has waaay too many extensions, looks awful, and so does the handy at the bottm
quit trying to exceed your capabilities and you'll start to realize the way your letters work.
skewt-i like the t for my own reasons
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razer- sharp lines bro >;l$
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Shell - Good job. Just keep doing simples like your last one, but work on bar consistency and making your lines not shaky.
Know - Your style is unique, but it's really hard to read. You should define the letters more, but once you can do that it will be cool I think.
Syn - The T in the piece is kinda ok. Dump the rest of the piece. You need to work on your bar consistency and your 3d is off in a few places. Try staying simpler for now
Tempo - It just looks so dirty, not in a good way. You need to clean it up a lot. Also your letters haven't seemed to have improved at all in a long time. I think you need to practice trying to clean your shit up as well as just doing simple letters until they look good.
Thotz - I already gave you crits. I wasn't shooting you down like everyone else does on this site, but you shot down my crits like you did everyone else. I now want to know where you are so that I can fucking cross out all of your wack shit because your never gonna get any better. You dis anyone that even tries to help you out. So. Fuck you.
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@thotz that "t" looks like a z, why would you only tilt one letter?
this is what this reads like
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