Don't like the S or the E very much o.O
Don't like the S or the E very much o.O
im guessing youre talking about the 3d
one more for the books...
ruzr piece..aint feelin the r's much crits?
looks a lot like RAZR, close the r off
shell keep at it your on the right path starting simple as it gets make your lines cleaner use a pencil so you can have 1 defined line rather than a bunch of lines.
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Not really feeling this piece, testing out these prismas I just got. I might need to do even more simples. Yes I know my W is fucked beyond belief.
take ur own crits, and these ones too. Start with teh S, gotta maintain the bar width bro, look how inconsistant it is on the curves, one of the main reasons it looks terrible. Then the K u gotta look at the same thing, like at the top of the left bar. Also, you gotta think of the 2 other bars of K as 1, you made a major fundamental error. THATS WHY WE DO SIMPLES. Bar width is off in spots on all the other letters too. The extended bar bottom of E is bad, and u already said adressed the W. The T has waaay too many extensions, looks awful, and so does the handy at the bottm
quit trying to exceed your capabilities and you'll start to realize the way your letters work.
skewt-i like the t for my own reasons
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Shell - Good job. Just keep doing simples like your last one, but work on bar consistency and making your lines not shaky.
Know - Your style is unique, but it's really hard to read. You should define the letters more, but once you can do that it will be cool I think.
Syn - The T in the piece is kinda ok. Dump the rest of the piece. You need to work on your bar consistency and your 3d is off in a few places. Try staying simpler for now
Tempo - It just looks so dirty, not in a good way. You need to clean it up a lot. Also your letters haven't seemed to have improved at all in a long time. I think you need to practice trying to clean your shit up as well as just doing simple letters until they look good.
Thotz - I already gave you crits. I wasn't shooting you down like everyone else does on this site, but you shot down my crits like you did everyone else. I now want to know where you are so that I can fucking cross out all of your wack shit because your never gonna get any better. You dis anyone that even tries to help you out. So. Fuck you.
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@thotz that "t" looks like a z, why would you only tilt one letter?
this is what this reads like
thotz we can all see u know how to fill in a piece now u just have to learn how to master ur lettering it might take some time dont try to rush it everyone thinks u just start with pin skills well u dont think of ur blackbook as a wall u dont just throw a piece up u need an outline so start with a pencil and as ur skills improve u wont need it but always go back to it to make and master new styles i dont need this site to tell me what my skill level is all the old school writers ive met have done that and if u want to know where graffiti is heading check out seensite.com
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Honestly, I don't think it's out of my capability. I just think I didn't try hard enough. I'm going to do one more, take my time on it. If it comes out like shit. Back to simples. All of these crits that were given were good. But I already knew them. I just didn't apply myself.
I fucked the "H" up....Crits?
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Space420 your a genius. all these fuckin toys on here really believe what they say to each other. WHO CARES WHAT ANYBODY THINKS ABOUT YOU AND YOUR STYLE, JUST FUCKING WRITE GRAFF! Fuck anybody who disagrees with me, i dont give a shit. Legends push on thru the haters, and dont give a damn if nobody is feelin there shit. I DO GRAFF FOR ME!!
how about you just shut the fuck up? thats sounds like a better plan to me.
how about you stop saying your doing graff for yourself, or stop posting on the internet for people (who arent you) to look at.
If your doing it for yourself, and you dont care, then why are you posting it here?
Because i can do whatever the fuck i want. and yes, i write for me. What does it matter to you? is there a reason your on my nuts everyday?
lol who are you to say my shit is sucks? or any of these toys on here? your style is plain, wack, simple, and has been repeated in graffiti about a MILLION times. so try talking to somebody who feeds into ur bullshit.
Last edited by thotz.one; 10-28-2011 at 04:54 PM.