Blackbooks

[SynOne]

Another attempt.

[aaesoo]

1st one was better.

and lol that sucks man. where i live in canada they have phillies in every convenience store. only thing i can never find is swishers. its a fuckin tragedy

[SynOne]

All we have around here is swishers lmfao.

[MTK]

Attachment 39169 Meh, I hate this piece but I could use some crits on it. I already know a few things that should have been done differently. This is on my friends ceiling tile.

you owe your friend a new tile!... jk but that Y looks more like a 4 and lose the arrows... 1 is ok but 7 is to much in my eyes but nice color...

[=Millix=]

Millix: Not simple enough and your alphabets are wiggly and inconsistant. Straighten them up and keep'em even. see the "new to graffiti" thread for tips and tricks.

Fasho, thanks man. There are a handful of letters I need to familiarize myself with a bit more. But yeah, my hand is way too fucking shakey.

[knowtheledge]

bars my dude

[bdubb]

i just randomly dropped this shit... havent done too many simps or anything but this doesnt look too bad

[H1P30N3R]

Fasho, thanks man. There are a handful of letters I need to familiarize myself with a bit more. But yeah, my hand is way too fucking shakey.

move your hand in a quicker less tense movement ... your lines are shakey because you trying real hard and drawing super slow

[newbornsek]

i just randomly dropped this shit... havent done too many simps or anything but this doesnt look too bad

hmm..dont think so

[Strange Journeys]

heres some canvasses i did, with some collabs

[ribcage]

2nd to last is the best, dude u did it with scrapes on you

[=Millix=]

last one for now. The L could be better, and the E could be a little more symmetrical to the S, but other than that, this is an improvement right?

[.Cuore]

debut your planets need more letter structure

[PETER]

LOL @ Cuore

Millinx: Make your S more like a box and don't let it over lap. Keep all parts of your letters the same width for now and keep that width consistant from letter to letter.

looking for ideas to make these look better. I am looking at the letters alone here, not shakey lines or the shit around them. For instance I don't know how I feel about the top of the K or if I should use a capital A and N.... and I am still have to do an I. I will work on flow etc when I put them all together.

[inthecity]

im digging those peter

[PETER]

thanks. I'm not liking the top of the K and am looking for ideas to give it more character. I still need to work out an I and then work on possible connections. I like the T a lot.

[inthecity]

i dont think the k is that bad i actually like it, it matches the proportions of the top of the "a"

[=Millix=]

Thanks Peter, those letters are looking dope too.

Also, wondering if someone who can actually draw who might wanna make this idea look good.

Only drawing the 3-d bit of a letter. An idea, but suck at doing. I know it's shit, not looking for crits.

[centrysam]

^wtf i dont get it lol

[Takeiteasy]

Thanks for the crits guys. Much appreciated. I'm gonna stick to a much simpler style from now on. I jumped the gun a bit.

As for the ceiling tile idea, his landlord actually recommended it. We gotten most of the ceiling done. I'll take pics soon.