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    Woah mang, that D is hurtin, and the S aint too good either. The bottom bar of S is too thick for how short it is, if you woud made it a little bit longer it probably wouldnt of made a difference

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    yeah colors im wit that ga'hed 1st tho lol.
    um dank i ono what he talk bout that is decent. even if you are a dick sometimes u can still write.
    only thing i see what he sayin is the supporting bar on the D is too think. big whoop
    if you took a moment to try to duplicate one of your favorite writers you dont have to post it but
    it might do you some good.
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    Smeck - If your goal was to make them all slanted to the right. Nice attempt. Try to make sure they are slanted at the same angle. That tends to help it flow better. I dig that fill though.

    DRZ - Bad bad letter structure. To many bends and pointless addons. Go simple and do a bunch of straight letters.
    Last edited by SynOne; 11-18-2011 at 12:24 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SynOne View Post
    Some stuff I done did do.

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    Exchange with Slotr. Not as clean as it needs to be.

    Bump Crit them.

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    My first attempt in a pretty long time. It's just a sketch so be as hard as you can on crits
    PS: it says ART btw
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    syn did a simp with no extensions, and what do you know, turns out to be the best thing hes ever done. You should have made your 3d go in the other direction, it woulda cut down way more negative space

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    Fuck you bro lol. I can do simps. But I'm trying to learn to start extensions. Cause I can rock simples.

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    Syn, that straight is pretty cool. nit keen on the character with it but it's still cool. just clean up the lines a bit. and as Ribs said, maybe it would have been better if the 3D was the other way.
    Spyrydus... ehm... scrap that altogether. you'll hear this a lot but do a straight letter or something. just start again.
    Tempo, the letter structure is horrible. try and straighten out the letters and make them all the same height. the 3D's off at some parts and the fill in the 3D doesn't look right. really don't like any of the letters....

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    i know the straight's a little off at parts. have since sorted them, just don't have a pic since fixing it.
    Last edited by TBS; 11-18-2011 at 04:47 PM.
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    Hello everyone. I'm new to the forums and to the whole graffiti scene. I'm just starting out to be honest... here's some of my recent pieces. Please check it out and give me some feedback on where to improve etc. Thanks!







    I used Molotow Paint Markers, Pencil Colors and Touch Markers...

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    that looks dopeeee^ tried somethin new today on the subway, lookin for crits

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    Sync, i think you have a good idea of what graff is but i also think you need to tone it back a bit with all the extensions and such.
    SkateJunt.... Simple simple simple simple simple please
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    Quote Originally Posted by TBS View Post
    Sync, i think you have a good idea of what graff is but i also think you need to tone it back a bit with all the extensions and such.
    SkateJunt.... Simple simple simple simple simple please
    Thanks, TBS. Much appreciated. I'll try to get some clean pieces out in the next few days and not try to go too 'wild' with the extensions till I get the full hang of things. Thanks!

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    like this stuff?


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    no worries sync.
    yeah. like that. but clean those up. take your time with it. make sure all your letters are the same height and all your bars are the same width.
    anyone got any crits on mine?
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    your stuff looks really sick, think you should be postin in intermediate

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    did this at school, got some fucked bars, and the ut is wack, fuck the whole things pretty wack, but imma paint it on sunday

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    i don't like the extensions but the basis of the letters is pretty cool
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    Quote Originally Posted by SynOne View Post
    Fuck you bro lol. I can do simps. But I'm trying to learn to start extensions. Cause I can rock simples.
    thats a straight letter though, wheres the simps with flow?

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    I smell bacon


 

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