tryn a new style! i normally do simps but i thought i would try to do one more complacated!
Beko, stick to the simples at the moment.
Tempo, that looks like a bad 'REN'
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for real tempo? When you ask someone to exchange with you, you should put some effort into it, and not do some half assed bullshit. If your as old as you say you are, then why does everything you do literally look like its from an 8 year old? Not even trolling right now, im serious, you draw and speak like an 8 year old. next time you draw, do something that has worth, not something my dog wouldnt wipe its ass with
unfinished waste of time.
Yo Ribcage. I'll throw an exchange that way. You know what I write.
no thanks, ive had enough bogus exchanges for one day. And I still owe people some, i just did that one cause I was already drawing.
Lol Reach, I did it anyways. Huge dead spot right on the E and 3D's off. But so be it. Get around to mine after everyone else.
ay you know somethin yall right im gonna redo tha for reach cause that is bogus as hell ma bad.
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tempo- did you not notice that the first time????? like wtf bro! i can do better than that an i just started!! more effert woulsd be nice when your doing an exchange! i would be pissed if that happened to me!
Last edited by Beko; 11-23-2011 at 10:31 PM.
woah beko not much room to talk and calm down on the beef its not even your exchange, although i agree that the piece is not all that great haha maybe another try tempo with a little more effort
lol sorry i just let out a lot of frustration on him, but i edited so no affending anyone sorry!
COLORS- the D looks a lot like an O if it wasnt for you saying naked i would think it was NAKEO. but the rest of the letters i like a lot! but on the E i dont like those pointy little spikes they just dont go with the rest of it. and just some of those random straight blue lines without the fades just dont look appealing to me!
i would also enjoy some crits please!
Bek just use wicked simple stuff dont go for all that arrow jazz just regular letters with no flair for now, and dont outline each individual bar, if you know what i mean? like in that piece dont outline the bars inside the letter like in the middle of the k where all the bars meet. look at my piece i guess for the outline
arright reach look man, u write i had 2 slow it down n' put a good light on so I could see wat im doin lol. the last one was half ass wont deny it. sry bout that but I did try to focus wit this much more but it only a start jus a pencil outline so... any thoughts where to go wit it?
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tempo just restart with wicked simple letters. remember bar consistency and stay simple. use bars
the legs on the R, A, and H just dont look good
well I did not plan on this to turn out so bizzare looking, I did fit all the letters but yet plenty to improve on no doubt. my C turnd a lil E'ish and that is just the tip of the iceburg, once I got started I just started adding on mad diff ish... anyways sorry to dissapoint fellas. I'll just keep trying
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