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    I like the kunt piece but idk if this is just me or if i cant tell good style but it seems your bars have way too many kinks in them in the other pieces. Idk maybe its fine, but through my eyes it looks weird

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    I prefer the Nark piece. It's just a little cluttered between the A and R. The kunt piece is good, I like the style but it seems a bit all over the place. I would like to see it with a full size U just for reference.

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    Crits? I know I most definitely hate the R and the 3D. Haha. Oh well. It was a 45 min piece that I kind of rushed through.

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    All the letters are pretty weak. Define your A more, and work on how to fully understand bars in letters.

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    unfinished because i am so cool
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    schools productive as fuck for me lol.
    I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills

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    AESO love those straights

    Picture 109 by SkateJunt, on Flickr

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    Some work is old, some not.

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    forget this.

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    Crits please! something im doing for the gf. whatcha think! all new letters besides the E and O

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    VVVVVV TBS- i really like all of those!! the only thing i dont like is the squigly line in the A and the color choices of the 3rd one! but other than that i like em mate!
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    Edit: Deleted and re-posted a better quality image.

    Sadgeh, some of your stuff's alright. just remember to keep an eye on that 3D though. some of the pieces are pretty cool but the 3D's off and it ruins them.

    Reach, had a go at your letters. now that i look at it i shoulda fattened up the first leg of that R... infact, i shoulda done a better R altogether!!
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    Yea i know but i dont even now how to do that 3d, so maybe some1 has some tips therefore.

    Tbs- Looking good, but the H is a lil bit bigger than the others, but overall it looks very clean.
    Beko- where is the V. But i like the connections.

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    sadgeh- its behind the heart and ontop of the E its like blended in with it
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/thevegasjman21/

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    Beko the V is too hidden,

    Sadgeh, what you're doing is alright, just remember to keep it clean
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    Quote Originally Posted by TBS View Post
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    Sadgeh, some of your stuff's alright. just remember to keep an eye on that 3D though. some of the pieces are pretty cool but the 3D's off and it ruins them.

    Reach, had a go at your letters. now that i look at it i shoulda fattened up the first leg of that R... infact, i shoulda done a better R altogether!!
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    very nice take at reach, i like it, the E is actually my least fav, i like that R. all personal taste i guess.

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    this was an exchange but hey crit it
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    with colored pencils.... probally couldve done without the little extensions on the B and O but it just looked out of place on both sides because they were so flat. wells crits and tips please! i really like this tyle i just need to IMPROVE it!
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/thevegasjman21/

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    beko before you go trying any style start out with simps. gonna help your letter structure

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    sadgeh- PLEASE keep posting! Its been along time since someone who could benefit from advice has showed up. Keep yo mind open to critisism and apply. I try the best I can to do so but I still suck. Maybe you do better, good luck!
    - Dam dude this page turned out some burners aside from a few pix that lack worthiness glad I have'nt posted yet I think I'll wait til' next page lol


    Edit: <----- Previous page ma fault heh well time to get to sketchin then right?
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    there were no burners on that last page


 

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