messing around just now, started with basic blocks and this is my first step towards making it interesting BUT i feel i'm lost right off the bat with the D.
and plan of moving the N so it doesn't look like its behind the D
any crits/suggestions appreciated
yes, dont fuckin triple post.
said I wasnt gonna finish, but I did. fucked my sharpie freebie hella bad, couldnt fit an H, and the R and C are doodoo
Pocket - use bars. Go look at the new to graffiti thread. Read it all. Learn how structure works. Ohh and on bekos piece that's not a Chinese letter. That's a shitty fucked up B that is ugly as Fuck.
Ribcage - sick ass exchange you got there. Yeah I would have cropped that at the bottom out if I were you. But I'm not even that good so. It's not near as bad as half the flicks in this thread.
I got 2 simps ima upload when i get to a comp. I cant do it on my phone that i know of.
Last edited by SynOne; 11-26-2011 at 06:17 PM.
yeah, not to be an ass, but my fucked up freestyle, rapes anything uve ever done
synone- im pretty sure he was talking about the O in orange. that pencil one was just like a 1 second sketch getting and idea for where to start. so stfu
Not disagreeing Rib. I know it does. I know my place. But i do know I'm definitely not even close to the biggest toy on this forum.
Crit them. My coloring skills are that of a 5 year old.. sorry.
Cool you don't like the handstyle. Not what im wanting crits on. How about critting the actual work Ffs.
Dave - Nice work. On the top one that E needs work. The bottom one that last letter which I think is a R. You can't even really tell what it is because it is so covered by the extra detailing and drips. I wouldn't have put that many drips between the left and right leg. It makes it blend to much. Bolden up that outline. You can tell you are putting in time on the work. Keep it up.
Rib and Syn, fuck you guys. Hahaha. You two are my inspiration. I will be biting everything you do from here on. Lulz. Pics from my ne piece tomorrow night.
Colors, I'm digging that Week piece. Good shit. Bars look clean.
putting me and syn in the same sentence is an insult. Unless the sentence goes something like "rib has waaay bigger cock than syn." or "Syn sucks muthafuckin donkey dicks, rib though, he okay."
^ Ayo fuck you lol. My shits getting cleaner and better. I'm improving.