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    exactly ribcage. tempo you cant tell the difference between whats good and whats not maybe thats why your not progressing man

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    Quote Originally Posted by snal View Post
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    some shit i sketched in my classes...with a pen and fax marker..took me 40 minutes,I tried to keep it simple
    any crits ?

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    not really, theres flaws to your letters, but their not major, keep on with letters like that

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    messed up alittle on the 3D but overall i like it! crits please!
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    http://www.flickr.com/photos/thevegasjman21/

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    Quote Originally Posted by snal View Post
    any crits ?
    i like it man, but maybe the U on tough and C on fuckers have little gaps of negative space that mess with the flow a little. if the left hand leg of the U kinda curved to the right at the top a little it might help.



    Quote Originally Posted by Beko View Post
    messed up alittle on the 3D but overall i like it! crits please!

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    is really cool man, love the japenese symbol, if you added some oranges/yellows or other shades of red into the 3d it might look more like the magma core and be awesome.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Takeiteasy View Post
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    Crits? I know I most definitely hate the R and the 3D. Haha. Oh well. It was a 45 min piece that I kind of rushed through.
    maybe try raising the R up a little and have the top of the E go through the hole on the R if that makes sense? and bring the right leg of the R in a little

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    messing around just now, started with basic blocks and this is my first step towards making it interesting BUT i feel i'm lost right off the bat with the D.

    and plan of moving the N so it doesn't look like its behind the D

    any crits/suggestions appreciated
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    yes, dont fuckin triple post.

    said I wasnt gonna finish, but I did. fucked my sharpie freebie hella bad, couldnt fit an H, and the R and C are doodoo
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    Pocket - use bars. Go look at the new to graffiti thread. Read it all. Learn how structure works. Ohh and on bekos piece that's not a Chinese letter. That's a shitty fucked up B that is ugly as Fuck.

    Ribcage - sick ass exchange you got there. Yeah I would have cropped that at the bottom out if I were you. But I'm not even that good so. It's not near as bad as half the flicks in this thread.

    I got 2 simps ima upload when i get to a comp. I cant do it on my phone that i know of.
    Last edited by SynOne; 11-26-2011 at 06:17 PM.

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    yeah, not to be an ass, but my fucked up freestyle, rapes anything uve ever done

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    synone- im pretty sure he was talking about the O in orange. that pencil one was just like a 1 second sketch getting and idea for where to start. so stfu
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/thevegasjman21/

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    Not disagreeing Rib. I know it does. I know my place. But i do know I'm definitely not even close to the biggest toy on this forum.

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    not anymore...

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    crit it. i bump myself
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    Crit them. My coloring skills are that of a 5 year old.. sorry.

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    @Skewt last one is pretty fresh
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    Quote Originally Posted by bcbuds View Post
    oh hey local taggers! i was wondering if any of you cats could meet up with me at one of the hip taggin spots around town. i have some pre rolled marijuana cigarettes and a full bag of super cool montana colours and some stolen krylon pm me gansters peace out much love one time
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    dave, you look blasted! hahaha!

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    @skewt: no me gusta el handstyle
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    lol we got a joker up in this bitch!
    It is impossible to keep a straight face in the presence of one or more kittens. ~Cynthia E. Varnado

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    Cool you don't like the handstyle. Not what im wanting crits on. How about critting the actual work Ffs.

    Dave - Nice work. On the top one that E needs work. The bottom one that last letter which I think is a R. You can't even really tell what it is because it is so covered by the extra detailing and drips. I wouldn't have put that many drips between the left and right leg. It makes it blend to much. Bolden up that outline. You can tell you are putting in time on the work. Keep it up.

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    Rib and Syn, fuck you guys. Hahaha. You two are my inspiration. I will be biting everything you do from here on. Lulz. Pics from my ne piece tomorrow night.

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    Colors, I'm digging that Week piece. Good shit. Bars look clean.


 

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