Blackbooks

[Colors]

beko before you go trying any style start out with simps. gonna help your letter structure

[Tempo718]

sadgeh- PLEASE keep posting! Its been along time since someone who could benefit from advice has showed up. Keep yo mind open to critisism and apply. I try the best I can to do so but I still suck. Maybe you do better, good luck!
- Dam dude this page turned out some burners aside from a few pix that lack worthiness glad I have'nt posted yet I think I'll wait til' next page lol


Edit: <----- Previous page ma fault heh well time to get to sketchin then right?

[ribcage]

there were no burners on that last page

[Colors]

exactly ribcage. tempo you cant tell the difference between whats good and whats not maybe thats why your not progressing man

[snal]

Attachment 42392
some shit i sketched in my classes...with a pen and fax marker..took me 40 minutes,I tried to keep it simple

any crits ?

[ribcage]

not really, theres flaws to your letters, but their not major, keep on with letters like that

[Beko]

messed up alittle on the 3D but overall i like it! crits please!
without clouds.


with clouds.

[pocket]

any crits ?

i like it man, but maybe the U on tough and C on fuckers have little gaps of negative space that mess with the flow a little. if the left hand leg of the U kinda curved to the right at the top a little it might help.

messed up alittle on the 3D but overall i like it! crits please!

is really cool man, love the japenese symbol, if you added some oranges/yellows or other shades of red into the 3d it might look more like the magma core and be awesome.

[pocket]

Attachment 42420

Crits? I know I most definitely hate the R and the 3D. Haha. Oh well. It was a 45 min piece that I kind of rushed through.

maybe try raising the R up a little and have the top of the E go through the hole on the R if that makes sense? and bring the right leg of the R in a little

[pocket]

messing around just now, started with basic blocks and this is my first step towards making it interesting BUT i feel i'm lost right off the bat with the D.

and plan of moving the N so it doesn't look like its behind the D

any crits/suggestions appreciated

[ribcage]

yes, dont fuckin triple post.

said I wasnt gonna finish, but I did. fucked my sharpie freebie hella bad, couldnt fit an H, and the R and C are doodoo

[SynOne]

Pocket - use bars. Go look at the new to graffiti thread. Read it all. Learn how structure works. Ohh and on bekos piece that's not a Chinese letter. That's a shitty fucked up B that is ugly as Fuck.

Ribcage - sick ass exchange you got there. Yeah I would have cropped that at the bottom out if I were you. But I'm not even that good so. It's not near as bad as half the flicks in this thread.

I got 2 simps ima upload when i get to a comp. I cant do it on my phone that i know of.

[ribcage]

yeah, not to be an ass, but my fucked up freestyle, rapes anything uve ever done

[Beko]

synone- im pretty sure he was talking about the O in orange. that pencil one was just like a 1 second sketch getting and idea for where to start. so stfu

[SynOne]

Not disagreeing Rib. I know it does. I know my place. But i do know I'm definitely not even close to the biggest toy on this forum.

[ribcage]

not anymore...

[Colors]

crit it. i bump myself

[SynOne]

Crit them. My coloring skills are that of a 5 year old.. sorry.

[dave the pirate]

@Skewt last one is pretty fresh

[.Cuore]

@skewt: no me gusta el handstyle